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The Things We Do For Love
Author: Mad Lews
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(Added on Dec 3, 2004)
(This month 10493 readers) (Total 23430 readers) |
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The wages/rewards of lust and envy. Can Jackie Richard and the lovely Julie work out there issues and find true happiness? Why not it's fiction. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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Quite good actually. The author doesn't fall for the bulldozer style so often used, to forego all the intimate details, but chooses to elaborate on feelings and setting.
Well done.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Jul 16, 2005 |
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Excellent menage-a-trois, with sizzling ending! REAL story, REAL people. It is quite rare - classical theme twisted, yet, ahem, natural (it is, actually).
Personally I wished it was longer - lingering on some scenes and more complicated relationships would not hurt the story (still just a matter of taste).
Now if there is more ... oh there is? <grin>
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Aug 4, 2005)
- Original story was part of a contest and limited to 6000 words. I scraped and slashed to get it there. As to further chapters, Who can say? Oh yeah I guess I could ask Jackie.
- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
BDSgirl
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Jun 23, 2005 |
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oh my goodness. how do You do that? not too long, not too short but just right. lol and boy does it feel good! and Hot :D (pun intended)
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Aug 4, 2005)
- Thanks blu, glad you like it hot.
Mad
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Mad Lews
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2005)
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Mad Lews
(Edit) (Oct 8, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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May 23, 2005 |
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Very well done. I loved the story, the surprises, the manipulative little sub ... all of it. And it had one of the best endings I've seen. God, I thinking I was holding my breath during the entire count! It almost had me sweating! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (May 24, 2005)
- Wow! It's good to see people are still reading this old thing. One unnecessary bit about the ending. Don't try this at home. It was preformed by trained fictional characters and I may have exaggerated a wee bit here and there for artistic reasons
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Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 24, 2005 |
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a very good story! you have a way with words that i like. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Mar 24, 2005)
- Wow! blush and all. Thanks for the review. Coming from you it means a lot. I was a bit disappointed with the first review you gave me. (Sir Stephen) and have striven to improve ever since.
- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
pbugler
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Dec 19, 2004 |
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This is a great story straining to push its boundaries. Well written and crafted, short and punchy with a marvellous point to make, a sting in the tail (tale?) that leaves one with a smile on one's face. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Dec 5, 2004 |
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Very good story, nicely done all the way. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cokera
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Dec 5, 2004 |
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I really enjoyed the tale. Nice well done ending also! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Davar
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Dec 4, 2004 |
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Verry strong story. Whith nice twist in the end.
higly recomended (9/10)
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