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Author: Randy the Writer
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(Added on Nov 23, 2004)
(This month 20479 readers) (Total 47569 readers) |
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A business man was made an offer that would make him a lot of money to train and sell slaves. He quickly took the offer and the story begins. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
smokescreen
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Aug 20, 2008 |
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I like the first 1/2 of the story but everything got a bit repetitive in the last 1/2. still a good read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
LoversDelight82
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Nov 27, 2004 |
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I enjoyed this story for one reason: the view in which it was written. Most D/s stories are written in the vantage point of the submissive.
However, to my dismay, spell check seems to not exist on this writers computers. Please know that when you put someone in a shippable box, it is called a 'crate', not a crete, as this is a country in Europe.
I look forward to more, but I sincerely hope that the storyline has a bit more detail, and less error in spelling. (7/10)
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peachmellon
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Nov 25, 2004 |
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The content of the story was awesome. I find it to be very creative with a wonderful plot of an idea. I really hope the writer will continue to write suchlike stories. I am beyond eager of reading them. I think the name calling is such a turn on. I love that part in any story..
thank you so much for writing.looking forward to more. (10/10)
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