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Janes Revenge
Author: David & Emma Beck
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(Added on Nov 19, 2004)
(This month 50784 readers) (Total 64141 readers) |
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Apartner catches her man with an over active sex drive having several affairs and gets her revenge |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 6, 2006 |
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First of all I rate a story as a story and not as a literary object. This is here not the purpose.
The story itself is quite good. The only part I like less is the unrealistic end with the "cage". But otherwise is is sexy. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Nov 27, 2004 |
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Any story that starts out with an error in the first word of its title has a problem. What frustrates me is the fact that the idea for this story is a good one. The execution could have been terrific, but the story was totally destroyed by an avalanche of typos, misspellings, changes in tense and other grammatical gaffes that I will refrain from going into in any detail. By not rereading this story and making some of the more obvious corrections you have done yourselves a great disservice. I would love to read this story once it has been edited by someone who knows something about the queen's english, or even what passes for it in this particular colony of America. (5/10)
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sam2004
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Nov 21, 2004 |
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nice story can be improved more
going well (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Nov 20, 2004 |
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David and Emma Beck are "authors for many years" but I didn't see that in this story. Besides the obvious error in the synopsis (you can e-mail Jinn at webmaster and he will correct it, I have done it before) the rest of the story seems to lack punctuation. I hope it was formatting, but it is difficult to read when there is no punctuation.
As far as the story, didn't really care for it. More of a description of what was happening as if the writer was outside the whole thing. What were the characters thinking or feeling? (5/10)
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