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Traitors! Female Execution in the Reich
Author: Jill Crokett
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(Added on Nov 14, 2004)
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Seven beautiful German housewives are convicted of conspiring to assasinate the Fuerher. All are found guilty and sentenced to... |
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kittkatt
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Very entertaining and great constant action! Love this author! (9/10)
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anzacman
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very droll and very repetative, lacking in imagination with the same scene over and over again. (4/10)
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jcrokett
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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This is just the best S & M trash ever written! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
daemongem
(Edit) (Mar 27, 2005)
- An author reviewing their own story? How low.
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mr addams
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Mar 18, 2005 |
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the story is somewhat bland, there is no detail as to what is happening,
it has a sort of "and then" feel to it, as in-
the first thing happened and then we did something else and then we did another thing and then.... it doesn’t really work
it could be improved though, its not completely without hope
(4/10)
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WMassa
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Dec 30, 2004 |
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What a pity: No real extreme ones took time for review yet. As to literature: farewell. As to cracking hard torture of female victims: First choice, or at least among. Did a stiffening job, Jill. Thx!! (9/10)
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Shack
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Dec 21, 2004 |
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This isn't really my kind of story, it's too stark and brutal for my taste, so in case of bias, I've rated it slightly higher than I feel it deserves. Firstly, there is too much redundancy, for example, in the first three paragraphs, how many times do we need to read "the judge" and surely "folding banquet tables" only needs to be said once. I know I'm being pedantic, but why is the judge's cigarette lighter constantly clicking and why is a Wermacht (no "i") colonel in charge of the SS? He also wouldn't use the word "pussy" he would say "pubic hair" or "genital hair." It's so difficult to write a historical story, the moment the details slip, it loses the reader. I think that Jill writes well, but there's too much dull repetition combined with grammatical errors. Also, the details seem wrong. Finally, I'm afraid, that I can't resist quoting this sentence: "The dark vertical slit between her legs indicated to the obstetrical nurse that her pussy had been clean-shaven." It would take an expert wouldn't it.
Brutal stories can engage me, I've read and very much enjoyed the writings of de Sade, but then he had a lot of style and took care of all of the details. (6/10)
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chksng19
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Dec 11, 2004 |
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Good descriptions and moves right along. Watch out for odds and ends as mentioned below: for instance, the first sentence in chapter 3 is redundant.
I see a lot of good things here; maybe an editor would help catch the little stuff. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Fantasyman26
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Nov 20, 2004 |
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Some really good stuff here. Since Nazi Germany had some really nasty people this story is quite believable.
Was very glad that you are doing updates. I would suggest you read "The Hamburg Story" by Llabmik69. It is posted in the BDSM Library. Extreme stuff you will find very interesting. Cannot wait to see more updates to this story. (10/10)
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longrover
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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Fiction, no doubt, but an entirely believable situation. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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I found the story enjoyable to read, there are other's like this but found this one unique (9/10)
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Breannefun
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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I thought this story was well written, but a little choppy. Like we were getting flashes, rather than the whole story. Additionally there were some tense errors where the author switched from past to present. That can work sometimes, but generally in first person. Content was good though. (8/10)
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