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The Painting
Author: Vlad Potemkin
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(Added on Nov 3, 2004)
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A beautiful woman finds a kinky painting in an art gallery. She should know: caveat emptor. This is a Halloween story that pays homage to a Stephen King short. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
polle
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Mar 25, 2009 |
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Way too short, but other than that :)) (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Haven't read the Stephen King short upon which this story is supposedly based, but it's a great read.
I don't mind there being not that much sexual action, the only thing I did mind, was the fact that you can surmise what's gonna happen right from the start.
Thanks to the skill of the author, that knowledge doesn't take much away from wanting to finish reading the tale.
JJ (9/10)
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stspreservus23
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Nov 19, 2004 |
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Don't remember the title of the episode but this is very reminiscent of an the "Night Gallery" series starring Roddey McDowell. Very good nonetheless. Love it!!!! I'm willing to bet the inspiration was that particular show! BUT, very good anyway...indeed!
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| Reviewer:
Tang
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Nov 18, 2004 |
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I liked it as far as it went. I am a sucker for women drawn into other planes of existence by artwork. I just wished we found out a bit more and what happens to her when she is there. I hope there is a follow-up. I agree with Alex Braggi's suggestions for augmentation. (7/10)
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LordVetinari
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Nov 5, 2004 |
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Brilliant! Absolutely, utterly brilliant! Spooky, arousing, scary, I can almost hear Rod Serling: "Consider a woman who buys a mysterious painting..." I recommend this to anyone who enjoys good kink. (10/10)
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pippa
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Nov 4, 2004 |
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I thought this was a smashing story- a refreshing change. Personally I like an author to let me participate by using my imagination as well. Many thanks for an entertaining read. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Nov 4, 2004 |
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Excellent work, very nice handling of the suspense and mystery, and I liked the minimalism of the bondage and all the possibilities left for the reader's imagination. Congratulations! (9/10)
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Alex Bragi
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Nov 4, 2004 |
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This story is entertaining and well written for sure.
However, I really feel that most readers, at this site, will expect a whole lot more titillation than what's being offered here. I would like to have seen it ‘sexed up' with maybe a flash back to a bdsm session with her lesbian friend as she stared at the painting. Or, maybe a quick seduction scene with Rebecca might have heated things up nicely? I think details of Leslie having some kind of bdsm experience prior would have made this story more ‘plausible’ too.
Others may disagree. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Darkstar2173
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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Great story. I hope to read more from this author. (8/10)
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