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Husband's Punishment
Author: Michael Ginsburg
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(Added on May 3, 2001)
(This month 89369 readers) (Total 126481 readers) |
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Misbehaved husband was punished by his dominant wife and friends, and his other adventures. Here are his punishment reports. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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not the best read out there but not the worst either. to be honest it didnt keep my attention but it could be improved (4/10)
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mkemse
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May 2, 2004 |
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this is a very gracious rating (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jul 13, 2003 |
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it would have been better to keep it shorter and to be more specific about each individual torment.
Boring (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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I agree with Nitrofox about the realism of this story - it does stretch credibility quite a long way. My view is that there really isn't much to like about the piece, as each of the victim's tormentors only merits a short description of her session, so there is little characterization. It just doesn't engage the reader. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jan 9, 2003 |
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I won't say that this story has no quality. However, it is a bit unrealistic:
1. If the guy hates the situation he is in so much, then surely it can't be difficult to get to the cops.
2. None of these women has a job? They can afford to spend whole weekdays doing that same crap over and over, which leads into ...
3. ... the action being original for about the first paragraph. After that it's just the same thing over and over. Knees in groins, and spanking. Sheesh, not even a tad of originality.
4. A couple minor typos, nothing much to worry about.
5. Going back to the job question. How can a family, with the husband obviously having no job, and the wife a college professor (not famous for being well payed). So that obviously brings up the question: How the hell does this family afford to put 3 girls through college?
All in all I disliked this story. I do commend the author for his effort however. (4/10)
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