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The Trap
Author: Cambridge
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(Added on Oct 29, 2004)
(This month 85129 readers) (Total 119028 readers) |
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William receives obedience lessons from Ms. Caroline Tanaka, a gorgeous Asian woman hired to entrap him. He soon winds up on the business end of her strap-on. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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good job (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
duchifat
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Nov 4, 2004 |
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waiting for the next chapters (10/10)
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- Replied by:
cambridge
(Edit) (Dec 4, 2004)
- Your kind words and rating for the story are much appreciated! I'm glad I finally registered to be able to respond to reviews. Authors love to know that there are real readers out there somewhere (smile).
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Oct 30, 2004 |
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Basically good story with a few exceptions (don't keep reading if you don't want plot stuf given awy). The main problem is that there doesn't seem a reason for the trap... maybe in subsequent parts? Still, the guy is caught but for no apparent good reason. A second minor problem is in the editting... a few quotes missing the quotes. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
cambridge
(Edit) (Dec 4, 2004)
- I'm glad you liked it. The reason for the trap is detailed in chapter two (out of four) so you guessed right that it was revealed a bit further on in the story.
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