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The Next Level
Author: Eric Stephenson
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(Added on Apr 29, 2001)
(This month 55601 readers) (Total 63993 readers) |
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A young woman has a unforgettable experience on a rich man's yacht. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Aug 12, 2003 |
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At least the boat part is well written.
Now, more parts are needed, at least to known:
- what happened with the senator
- will the narrator remember that or not
- will some gunguy come back to clean up memory or
will they meet again and replay it...
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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May 2, 2001 |
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The main problem I have with this story is that it isn't a story. It's a story
fragment. It has possibilities, but it stops just as it starts to get interesting.
Why bother? I've never understood this practice of posting incomplete stories.
If the author can't be bothered to finish it, why should anyone bother to read it?
If you can somehow get past this particular elephant in the living room, it's not
a bad beginning, although there is almost no dialog which makes it read a little
like a laundry list. (4/10)
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