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The S^3 Society Olympiad
Author: The Chairman
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(Added on Oct 14, 2004)
(This month 25641 readers) (Total 51323 readers) |
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The S^3 Society holds its first ever Sex, Screams, and Snuff Olympics. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (7.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
pharma
(Edit) |
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Jul 9, 2016 |
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Wow, the girls are true masochists! (8/10)
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Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !! (1/10)
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Reviewer:
Losalt
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Apr 18, 2010 |
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Ok.. Nice story (or rather concept) but there's one breach of logic in your story that's sort of annoying.. Basically in a competition like the snuff marathon you have to have something that people are competing in like the slaves endurance and willpower and the torturers skills in braking that endurance and willpower and the trainers skills in strengthening it beforehand.. If you allow the torturers to kill the slaves without their consent their willpower, their ability to endure no longer matter all that much.. It's no longer an competition really. The torturer might as well just take a gun and shoot the snuffettes as soon as everything goes if the speed of death is all that matter.. That detail sort of was a turnoff for me.. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Robin Lane
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Oct 24, 2004 |
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I will say this first... I prefer a story to actually have a story. This tale seems to follow the pattern of sports news coverage, which may be the point, but there is no reason for us to care about the characters. On the other hand, it was very imaginative and a lot of fun to read, which is the point of fantasy in the first place. If you are looking for something to keep you excited while you make use of your bedroom toys, this will do the job. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2004)
- You are quite correct. This was not a "Story" in
the sense of having characters you should care about. It was meant to follow sportscasts, and was inspired by watching the recent coverage of the Olympic games. It was a series of vignettes and throwaway fantasies. So if you enjoyed it in that spirit, then I am pleased. Thank you for your feedback, it is much appreciated.
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Reviewer:
pippa
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Oct 16, 2004 |
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This one made me smile a lot so I loved it. What an imagination !!!- are you on something? - and if so what is it (just teasing) pippa (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2004)
- I am glad you loved it. While I must confess that I
write principally for my own entertainment, I do enjoy knowing that others enjoy it too. And yes, I am on something. ;)
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Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Oct 15, 2004 |
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This story was really good. What an imagination! I liked the descriptions. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2004)
- Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you
liked it. I have many more ideas than I currently have time to write, but I try to do so every now and again. So keep watching this space. :)
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Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Oct 14, 2004 |
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Quite good. Your writing is quite good, and I must compliment you on your editing as well - I didn't spot a single spelling error. Further, you managed to hit the "American Sports Commentator" style dead on, with just enough over-the-top extremity to raise a smile at the spoofishness. A great read! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2004)
- Gee! No spelling errors! ;) But seriously, thank
you for your kind words. :) I keep setting out to write "non-spoofish" stories, but they go their own way. And so it goes...
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