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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
(Edit) |
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Oct 18, 2004 |
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Seriously unrealistic (Ruby's review) and not particularly enjoyable. More disgusting than anything else. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Oct 16, 2004 |
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Adequate writing, but don't rely on a computer spellchecker - it doesn't get words that are correctly spelt but wrong in context.
Definitely should have had the "Young" descriptor.
Ah, the listing has "Young" in it now. Good. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
(Edit) |
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Oct 15, 2004 |
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Very hard to read with someone so young.
It's almost fantasy, considering what
they do to her a normal 10-year old can't
take without a lot of phsycial damage.
Please recode and add incest to your list.
I agree with the earlier reviews.
IMHO: If you want more readers,
change the age to 16. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
MasterRJ
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Oct 15, 2004 |
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Actually if you look on the update page it was labled as Young. Now I have no idea why it wasn't labled as Young in the introduction, but buyer beware. I mean, when the guys snuck into the room and started eyeing over Sherrie, you couldn't honestly thing her virginity would survive the night. Actually I found this story very enjoyable. Pretty similair to the Perils of Pauline at Christmas in some ways, except the kid survives, which is a plus in my book. Well...sort of...the way you did the snuffing was...oddly erotic to me. Hmm...I gave it an eight. I rarely sit and read an entire story, but this one I couldn't put down. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
bdsmbill
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2004)
- The "young" label on the update page was added after most of these reviews were written.
- Replied by:
MasterRJ
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2004)
- Never the less people are acting like they had no idea the girl would be raped. It was clear to me from the second I read about the ten year old daughter she'd be raped. I like to assume such intelligence is shared. I like to think if you get offended so easily then perhaps BDSM and rape related erotic fiction isn't your bag...
- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2004)
- Young? You could use all kinds of euphemisms here, but it won't change what this is - it's purely paedophilia. I feel it should be noted in the synopsis that this is a story for paedophiles. Sorry, no rating from me, this isn’t my idea of an enjoyable, or erotic, read.
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| Reviewer:
kayce
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Oct 15, 2004 |
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when I sent it in I did put different codes and the word pedo its how Jinn sets it up and it was written for a pedo site. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 15, 2004 |
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No warnings means lost readers, and folks who might not trust next time. As with pippa and mkemse, I couldn't finish the story.
Sneaking kiddie porn to people is not a good thing. You do have some writing skills, though editing needs some help; lots of wrong words and misspellings. Several grammar concerns too.
You seriously need to consider these things; perhaps fix the story, label it properly, and try again. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
pippa
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Oct 14, 2004 |
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I couldnt finish it as it made me feel sick. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 14, 2004 |
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i agree with bdsmbill (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Oct 14, 2004 |
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I am giving this story a very low rating, not because it was poorly written, but because the story codes do not warn the reader that it involves a 10 year old girl being raped. I don't like being surprised by child porn. If you change the codes, let me know and I will change the review. (1/10)
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