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Lisa's FSTB
Author: John Williams
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(Added on Oct 10, 2004)
(This month 33980 readers) (Total 65524 readers) |
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Lisa's tits get her into trouble, so they are severely punished to teach her a lesson. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 19, 2005 |
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wish bth of your stories had been NC but it was still worth reading (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Oct 30, 2004 |
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A good story, with characters who intrigued me. Their kink is not exactly my kink, but the story is well told, and I am looking forward to future chapters and new tales with these characters. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
pbugler
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Oct 29, 2004 |
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Interesting and reasonably well written. I'd like to see this developed into a larger story. I particularly liked the menace of future ounishments, the anticipation of painful commands fulfilled during the Master's absense. (7/10)
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chksng19
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Oct 12, 2004 |
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An OK story, good writing skills. Seemed to be something a sub would write, rather than the master. Next time it might be interesting to change viewpoints, and tell some of what the sub gets out of the relationship. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
pippa
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Oct 10, 2004 |
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It was well written but I didnt like either of characters. I wanted to know what she felt when she was being tit slapped. I am not really into humiliation so I guess it didnt do it for me but it was a good read -thank you. (7/10)
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bracemaiden
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Oct 10, 2004 |
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The story was creative, but drawn out by the slut's repeating of all commands. The breast torture was an amusing read, but the lack of self-worth wasn't quite up my alley. (8/10)
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