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The Museum of Inquisition
Author: Michael Alexander
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(Added on Oct 6, 2004)
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An American professor of history takes his students to a Museum of Medieval Torture. One young lady decides to sit out the tour, but does she? |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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JimmyJump
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Feb 14, 2009 |
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The writing is very good, but the story itself comes across as too much wishful thinking.
Some stories are pure fantasy, where anything is possible. Others, like "Museum Of Inquisition" are a reflection of a possible reality. In that respect, the story fails as there's too many improbabilities.
JJ (7/10)
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Ropetrick
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Oct 3, 2005 |
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A nice story, seemed like a very good mix of story and BDSM. Nigh perfect for a short story.
I gave a 9 because while the story was nice, it was not credible enough. Offcourse, no need for a perfect story but you only give a 10 if you can't imagine parts being better.
The BDSM was also a bit to little, it sort of ended without a how do I say, tangible conclusion.
But these are some minor remarks for why it's a 9 and not a 10. Again, excellent story. (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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Very nice story. I enjoyed it. So, why do you end each story with the phrase (in Latin) "We shall be together forever?" (or maybe eternally) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Sep 22, 2005)
- Dear Bill,
Actually, I don't end each story with that phrase, which perhaps should or could be best translated as "always and forever". The total truth is that my wife (who studied Latin in college) signed her love notes to me with that salutation. It has always had personal meaning to me, and as such, I have adopted it as my own. A personal example of eccentricity perhaps? I have no idea. In any event, I appreciate your words of appreciation.
Yours Faithfully,
Michael Alexander
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mkemse
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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loved it (10/10)
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Qmoq
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Nov 15, 2004 |
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This is an astonishingly well-told tale. The sub's reactions are vivid and intersting, and the devices used are unfamiliar, exciting and beautifully described. (10/10)
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Ruby
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Oct 22, 2004 |
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I really liked your opening tease and
that you managed to follow through with
a great original story.
Writing a hot short story is an art.
You've mastered it.
Please keep them coming...and coming...and coming. (10/10)
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Dododecapod
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Oct 13, 2004 |
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Oh, I very greatly enjoyed this one! The torture of "Liesel" is one of the great rarities on this site - a genuinely new idea.
And your writing and editing is exceptional. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2004)
- Dear Dododecapod, Thank you very much for your words of appreciation. A rating of 10 from you means more than the usual. You haven't given that rating out often, and even rated one of my stories a 7, which was the lowest that story received. I must admit a curiosity for the reason this one rated so high, however I am pleased that it did so. In any event, again my thanks. Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
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pippa
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Oct 10, 2004 |
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Mmmmmm- licks my lips- I found this very educational *grinz*. I dont usually like quick BDSM but this was excellent. A great story line and plot so much so that I didnt worry about the few mistakes. I love your imagination. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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Great story, nicely done. Mild BDSM is very well done (but secretly wish the story was longer, or had more chapters. Maybe a sequel?). (10/10)
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- Replied by:
michaelalexande
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2004)
- Dear chksng19,
Authors are frequently bombarded for requests for sequels and "expanded" editions. Unfortunately, my style is limited to short stories, since I frequently work on so many projects at once, I rarely have the attention span needed for a novella length work. Suffice it to say, Breanne's story is finished. There is no more. Alas and C'est la vive.
Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
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Breannefun
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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I loved this story despite the word confusion problems. There were several mistakes that were distracting. The descriptions were wonderful though, and I loved how the museum curator gave us those descriptions as if he was lecturing us. Of course, I really loved this story because she had my name. (OK not really, but it made it more personal.) (10/10)
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michaelalexande
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2004)
- Thank you for the inspiration my dear.
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| Reviewer:
Spectre
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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A different angle than usually seen here. Very nicely done. (10/10)
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bisarah
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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What a great story!!! I particuarly enjoyed the ending ... what a twisted, twisted Professor! (10/10)
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angelgirl
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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That must have been a heavy book, HA HA. It was a much more technical story than I could ever write; but I loved it. I was soaking wet.
Thanks
Angelgirl (10/10)
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