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Legally Bound
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Oct 2, 2004)
(This month 16947 readers) (Total 34648 readers) |
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(excerpt from the recently publish E-Novel 'Legally Bound') Henry always enjoyed the high life, even though it meant living beyond his mean and his addictions of gambling, drinking and womanising didn't help matters. Devlin Butterworth, a sophisticated criminal accumulated Henry's debts and demanded payment, making it clear what the consequences would be for failure. Exhausting all avenues and with time running out, Henry reluctantly visits his estranged wife, Virginia who is a very successful legal practitioner. As Henry has no collateral, Virginia refuses to lend the money but suggests he may have something to sell - himself! She prepares a contract and if Henry signs it, he will become an indentured servant to his ex-wife! And what Henry doesn't know is that Virginia has learned some things from the Maya twins! |
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| Reviewer:
jchorner9
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Mar 28, 2007 |
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This isn't a story; it is a preview. It is no more than an enticement to a website where she can sell you stories. (2/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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Excellent start hope to read more of the story. (7/10)
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bracemaiden
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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As per all of Carmencia's stories, I have to rate it based only on this chapter; other ones will not be forthcoming here. While I like a good tease, this one did not go far enough to get the reader interested, there was too much talk of money and meat cleavers to be erotic. (5/10)
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pet10
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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The story probably good, but I’ m a student from abroad, I’m short of money therefore I read BDSM Library it was gratis. Carmenica advertise in this place her stories… is it fair? I’m disappointed with Carmenica. For mony I can read in a large quantities femdom stories (1/10)
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- Replied by:
sunburststrat
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2004)
- Let's see, you say "The story probably good", then give it a "1"!?! Your rating is what's unfair!!! These authors put a lot into these stories and deserve serious reviews. The issue of an excerpt pointing to a pay site has been covered already. Read the Forum. This has NOTHING to do with the quality of the story.
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jchorner9
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2007)
- I agree with pet10: the piece was a tease meant to advertise and does a disservice to the rest of the authors. Other contributors may not possess Carmenica's acumen but at least they try to write a cohesive narrative.
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