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Jennifer Has a Plan
Author: Rafu
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(Added on Sep 25, 2004)
(This month 9183 readers) (Total 19335 readers) |
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A boarding-school girl tries to wriggle out of a spanking, and learns to beware what you wish for. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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Okay, so there's not too much explicit sex scenes here, neither is there real BDSM involved, but hey, you guys 'n' dolls still must have noticed that it is extremely well written with some, rather hard to be found, true to life conversations between the girls...
Therefore, and for that alone, I must grant this a nice eight.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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the story was ok, but no real erotic shock value, to mondane ,needs some kick (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Sep 28, 2004 |
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I must admit that I am addicted to the elegant prose produced by this author. He does more with less than anyone posting to this site. However this one is almost too pedestrian for my tastes. It lacks heat and that subtle eroticism that infuses most of his works. We all have our bad days, and perhaps this was his. My rating does not conform to the suggested standards for this mark. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
rafu
(Edit) (Sep 28, 2004)
- Thanks Lex, for this and other reviews. You're absolutely right. This was my attempt to write an erotic story while pretending it was something else -- an old-fashioned school story, with hockey-sticks and cream buns and a strict but fair head girl. And halfway through I realised it was doomed, because the sexlessness of the girls was cancelling any real chance of eroticism. When all is said and done, there probably isn’t much ‘heat’ to be found in a muddy hockey match. Even so, I may have another go at it, some day. I'll either make it much more explicitly sensual ... or remove the spanking altogether, and send it to the ‘Girl’s Weekly’. I can't decide which. Your comments are much appreciated, however.
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