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The Maya Twins
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Sep 4, 2004)
(This month 54911 readers) (Total 68008 readers) |
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Once upon a time, there were the Maya twins. Hannah and Savannah Maya were identical, breathtakingly beautiful and with definition of morality that was unique. Very, very rich and constantly bored, they were amused when Hannah's new husband, Jonathan, declared his undying love with the purchase of the state of the art chastity belt, the Dickson Device. (Note: This is an excerpt from the author's recently published e-novel.) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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A part for the masturbation story there is nothing in it... except advertisement of a paysite (1/10)
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makito
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May 23, 2005 |
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Excellent buildup. (10/10)
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pet10
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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The story probably good, but I’ m a student from abroad, I’m short of money therefore I read BDSM Library it was till now gratis. Carmenica advertise in this place her stories… is it fair? I’m disappointed with Carmenica. For mony I can read in a large quantities femdom stories (1/10)
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bracemaiden
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Sep 6, 2004 |
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Given the author's history, I have to assume there will not be a part 2 available here, and must review this as its own story. The only chastity belt mentioned was one line about "The Dickson Device", and even that wasn't very descriptive. The autor belabors that there are twins, and that they are beautiful. Given the story is 7K, that's a lot of the story. The only good part is the wanking scene. If there was more story, perhaps the rating would be higher, but I don't expect that. (7/10)
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