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Ms Loren's Birthday
Author: kittenfemme
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(Added on Sep 3, 2004)
(This month 51618 readers) (Total 67445 readers) |
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sara arranges a surprise for Ms Loren on her birthday. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
FlameDesire
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Jul 16, 2007 |
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Lovely story, the plot was nicely thought out. The two of them seem perfectly made for each other. The Mistress is strict, but not insanely. Your stories are probably one of the top ones here in my opinion. Most others are too fake or disturbing for me, but yours are perfect! The punishment was interesting and the reason wasn't lame. Plant pots! Haha, lovely. I do hope you continue writing. (9/10)
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nova
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Sep 12, 2004 |
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i did so enjoy the relationship between Mistress and sub. i actually feel quite jealous really...*sigh* These are two quite lovely characters who i would like to know better. More? Please? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Sep 12, 2004)
- I notice that you've reviewed at least one of my other stories posted here nova. Thank you for continuing to read my little fantasies and thank you for taking the time to write reviews. If you really want to see more of a particular story or if you have an idea for one that you like me to write then please either reply to a review here, e-mail me, or send a private message to me (kittenfemme) from the BDSM Library forums. I have to write a story each month and often have trouble coming up with ideas. A little outside inspiration would be appreciated and credited if you so desire.
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Sep 8, 2004 |
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Well written, shows caring and a relationship between sara and Ms Loren. Decent
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(8/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Sep 12, 2004)
- Thank you bracemaiden. :)
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| Reviewer:
fullcycle
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Sep 6, 2004 |
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Thanks for the story, kittenfemme. A nicely done tale, with a good balance of character development and action. Reminds me of why I have plants. A good D/s dynamic between these two. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Sep 12, 2004)
- Plants, indeed. *giggle* Thank you for the review fullcycle.
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Wmnwholves
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Sep 5, 2004 |
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Once again a very well laid out story about Mistress Loren and Sara. I like the insights that you have given in their relationship. Seeing that her punishment was d/t her neglect of her own care. It showed how much she loved Sara. Keep up the good work. And await more from your muse when she is cooperative. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Sep 12, 2004)
- Thanks for the review Wmnwholves. Often enough my muse doesn't cooperate. Thankfully, my Mistress offers a little incentive. If I don't finish a story a month I get in big trouble. And... well... it rolls downhill. Hmm... now I've interesting thoughts of binding and gagging my muse. *contented sigh* What was I doing? *giggle*
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spike
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Sep 4, 2004 |
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Out of over 1000 readers, no-one else wanted to review this! I thought this was very clean and focused, which is something lacking in many internet stories. The characters were placed in just enough context to understand who they were but without unnecessary details of their lives and their bodies. The relationship was sketched lightly but clearly, the different facets of b/d, d/s, s/m, sex, and simple love were all expressed and the differences in status-relationships in those five facets were brought out. I suspect this story was MsL's real birthday present. And the action was hot, the sex good, and, as a (hetero, male) reader I was involved and aroused. I didn't give it a ten, but it would have to be pretty awesome to get that - I am still conscious. Maybe that's why nobody else has reviewed it.
Excellent.
Spike (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kittenfemme
(Edit) (Sep 12, 2004)
- Wow, Spike... thank you for the fabulous review. I understand that you've high standards. I'll just have to try a little harder (no pun) next time to get a ten from you. :)
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