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Hell to Heaven
Author: jaeangel
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(Added on Aug 31, 2004)
(This month 46950 readers) (Total 96448 readers) |
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A sub in in the clutches of brutal, abusive men finally is rescued by someone who truly understands what Dominance and submission mean. (This is an excerpt from the ebook Hell To Heaven) |
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| Reviewer:
delish
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Nov 26, 2004 |
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I don't think I have the words to properly express what a fantastic story this is- and what can I say that hasn't already been said here? Grammar and spelling were fine, but it was told with so much warmth and eloquence that the mundane things become secondary anyway. I had to steel myself to read through the first parts, but I'm so glad I did. Even if you dislike violence, this story is well worth the read, because it isn't gratuitous violence. The stark contrast of the later chapters often had me in tears, to be quite honest. The characters are real, not automatons or puppets of the author. It's impossible not to relate to them, to celebrate the victories and to feel the depths of emotions they feel in each stage of the story. If you are worried because of the darkness and the depressing nature of the early chapters, please stick it out, because the end is supremely uplifting. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- Thank you for the compliments! I'm sorry it has taken so long for me to respond, as I've been rather busy. A publisher offered a while back to publish 'Hell To Heaven'and it is now available for purchas at www.bdsmbooks.com. It is expanded from the version that originally appeared on this site, with two new chapters as well as more detail! Enjoy!
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Dngnkeeper
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Nov 6, 2004 |
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WOW!! What a compelling and visionary story. You have set in words the epitome of a BDSM relationship. The love, trust and respect that should flow in both directions. With great character development and and the right amount of detail to bring the story alive. It is a shining example of how to do it (writing and BDSM) right. Thanks. (10/10)
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jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- That's what I was trying to do. Show the extremes between people who don't truly understand what D/s is...and the people who do. Love, trust, and respect should be a part of every intimate D/s relationship; if it isn't the relationship is nothing more than glorified abuse. Having had my own near-fatal brush with a dom-wanna-be like Chris and Rob, I can perhaps understand that distinction better than some.
'Hell To Heaven' is now available for purchase in ebook format from www.a1adultebooks.com and www.bdsmbooks.com. This is an expanded version of the original story, with two chapters and more detial added. Hope you enjoy it! Thank you for reading, and especially for reviewing!
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chksng19
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Nov 6, 2004 |
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My God, woman! What a powerful, sexy story. I grew to hate the antagonists, and wondered if the heroine would ever escape her awful fate. Master Simon rode in on his steed and truly saved her from a fate worse than death.
Clearly defined, excellently developed characters and flowing actions make me glad I kept coming back for more. Master Simon, with whom I can identify (just a little: I hope to achieve his level of love some day with my partner), demonstrated the strength of the honest and true d/s life. A shared discipline, with the needs of both taken care of as appropriate, and with control on the part of both as required. This story should be in the guide to D/S I keep seeing at Amazon. A truly powerful story, full of honest affection. You are gifted! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- Umm...what can I say to such glowing praise? 'Thank You' seems inadequate.
I've been reading stories on this site and responding to messages in the Forums for a while now, but there's a sad lack of stories on here that truly define what D/s is. Most of the stories on here focus on the physical aspect of a D/s relationship; or are true fantasy, like dragons eating people. While the story might be good, it's not realistic. I wanted to explore the minds and hearts and motivations that power a relationship like this. Because, after all, the motivations and emotions are the reason we all are interested in D/s. And apparently I did a good job, since it's now available in ebook format from www.bdsmbooks.com. Thank you for reading, for reviewing (and for the high rating)!
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Ruby
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Nov 5, 2004 |
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Update - Nov 5, 2004
The ending was well worth the wait.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Just finished chapter six - keep it up - you're doing a great job. I want Rob and Chris punished in the biggest way. Master Simon is a dream come true. Please keep working towards a happy ending and thanks for contributing such a mesmerizing piece. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2004)
- Ypou're welcome! I've enjoyed writing this story so far. Master Simon is the kind of Master I wished i had when i first began to take an interest in submission, but after a traumatic experience I left too afraid to try again. This is kind of what I wish my experience had turned out to be like. Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Rocky
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Sep 15, 2004 |
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Not a bad start, but the number of spelling and grammer errors detracted from the story. I do look forward to reading future chapters.
Okay, Chapter 4 was just read, and I have to tell you, the hell with what I said about spelling and grammar...very minor issues here. A wonderful plot, and I'm always a sucker for a happy ending (though it hasn't ended yet...I hope!) (9/10)
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jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- I try and try to catch all of the misspellings and typos in the story before it posts, and I thought I had all the ones in this chapter covered, but apparently I missed some. If you could write me an email telling me which mistakes those were, I'll correct them ASAP. I'm a perfectionist, so the knowledge that I've missed something bugs me. You can reach me at baemaminski@msn.com. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story, and I hope you enjoy the expanded published version at www.bdsmbooks.com!
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bratty_minx
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Sep 13, 2004 |
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Wonderful story. i am glued, and waiting for more updates. Being the romantic that i am, the fact that there is a better life waiting for 'little one' is the high point for me. It will be interesting to see how she comes to terms with the kindness after the cruelty, and i do sincerely hope that so-called Masters Rob & Chris get their's in the end. Quite literally in the 'end' i hope!! (9/10)
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jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- I haven't yet decided what I'm going to do with the abusive bastards, but she will respond to the kindness! Wait till next update!
Thanks for reading, and especially for reviewing! The expanded version of 'Hell To Heaven' can now be purchased at www.bdsmbooks.com.
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littleslut
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Sep 11, 2004 |
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a stunning peice that leaves you desperatly wanting more and more. I can't wait for the next update to enjoy more of a story that has the potential to be one of the clasics of erotica. (10/10)
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jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- Wow!
I'm blushing here, i didn't expect to get such a high rating. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy the expanded version of 'Hell To heaven', now available for purchase at www.bdsmbooks.com! Enjoy the story!
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Darkstar2173
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Sep 11, 2004 |
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I'm really enjoying your story. Its intense adn frightening. At first I felt it was too much but I realized that there's still more to tell. Looking forward to your updates. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- Yes, the beginning is violent and extreme. It gets better, though. Look for 'Hell To Heaven' , now available for purchase at www.Bbdsmbooks.com and www.a1adultebooks.com! Thanks for reviewing!
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LordVetinari
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Sep 5, 2004 |
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Disturbing, erotic, brilliant. An interesting vignette. The writer sketches out just enough detail, without talking it to death. I will be watching her further writings wiyh interest. (8/10)
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jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- Thank you very much for your kind words! The expanded version of 'Hell To Heaven' is now available at www.bdsmbooks.com or www.a1adultebooks.com Any comments you might have, suggestions for making my writing better, will be greatly appreciated. Thank you for reading, and especially for reviewing!
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| Reviewer:
bernie
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Sep 3, 2004 |
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Excellent story line and written well. The action "it" is subjected to is very well done and shows what a human can endure to try to please Master (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- My very first 10/10! Gosh, I'm blushing. I didn't expect my first story to recieve the response it has, or even to enjoy publishing sucess (the expanded version is now available at www.bdsmbooks.com and www.a1adultebooks.com.) Thank you, and I hope you enjoy future chapters!
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| Reviewer:
lahrling
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Aug 31, 2004 |
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Very well done first chapter. Left me wanting more. Good use of the English language. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Apr 24, 2005)
- I like to finish stories once I start them. The finished version of 'Hell To Heaven' is now available for purchase at www.bdsmbooks.com or www.a1adultebooks.com. Thank you for reading, and especially for reviewing!
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