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The LardAss Saga
Author: JEP
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(Added on Aug 28, 2004)
(This month 113625 readers) (Total 168304 readers) |
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A man fulfills his dream of capturing various women of his dreams. Then, he degrades, humiliates, punishes them until they become his willing sex slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 9, 2004 |
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Outstanding when i first read the story title i thought no let it go, them i decided to read it, glad i changed my mind, hope you have more coming soon (10/10)
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- Replied by:
JEP3
(Edit) (Nov 9, 2004)
- I'm glad you liked what you read. More stories are in the works.
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| Reviewer:
Lascivious
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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This is one of my favorite stories. I don't necessarily get off on some of the more extreme pain the girls suffer, but I do like the humiliation they receive. It's hard to find stories about scat where the man is the DOM. I'm not really into actually eating shit as much as I like the degradation of women being shit upon or forced to lick an ass dirty or not. I do think you should start a new story along those lines with different characters and situations... this one is getting a bit long and redundant. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
JEP3
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2004)
- Thanks for your kind words. I agree that it got a bit long and redundant. I had ended it about two chapters earlier and then I was told the character of LardAss was too good to end. But - all things have to come to an end. I plan to have a different story with different characters by the end of the month.
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 30, 2004 |
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The author has done himself a tremendous disservice by posting this enormous effort in one fell swoop. I took the liberty of reading one chapter and have concluded, based on this small sample, that we may have an epic of some sort on our hands. The writing is solid, the characters totally depraved, the action completely outrageous, and to top it off, it is a love story. I'm going out on a limb and recommending this to those with thick skins, a sense of humor and an interest in most of the basic perversions we so very much enjoy. I will likely update my review once I have the time to read another chapter. Stay tuned. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
JEP3
(Edit) (Aug 30, 2004)
- Thanks for the positive feedback. It started out as a short story and then simply took on a life of its own. Since this is my first try, I worried that it would be too gross.
- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Aug 30, 2004)
- Obviously you haven't read any of my stuff
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