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Almost Chance
Author: Noe Bode
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(Added on Aug 20, 2004)
(This month 120627 readers) (Total 144954 readers) |
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Travelling on a train to meet a friend, Jen is sidetracked when she meets a mysterious woman and is soon drawn into a world fo submission and slavery. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Dahyaska
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Oct 2, 2012 |
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Thank you so much for this wonderfull story !!
This story brought back feelings I thought were gone , but I feel blazing thru my body now!
I hope you write more of these stories!
Thank You so much,
Dahyaska (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Sep 30, 2012 |
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I have nothing more to add than please, please do write some more about jen and Mistress ...... how about what happens at one of her "open house" events? (10/10)
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Martiniman
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Dec 27, 2011 |
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A simply wonderful & erotic tale of submission & love...a must read! (10/10)
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RiverOtter
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Feb 23, 2007 |
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Very well written. The descriptions of the various physical sensations really worked. I would liked for the story to go on further. (9/10)
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Perrin
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Feb 19, 2007 |
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Very good and enjoyable. Good plot, I agree with the others about getting the feelings and getting into Jen's head. Good action sequences too. Would like to see more of the same. (10/10)
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Lisa Jones
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May 1, 2006 |
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I loved this story ever since I stumbled across it some time back. I'ts part of what inspired me to post my own story. I particualrly like the way you concentrate on feelings. Too many stories, in my opinion, get lost in the action and forget that they're about people.
My one slight crticism is the opening sequence. I find it hard to beleive that any woman would walk off a train with a complete stranger. Having said that, it wasn't too difficult to suspend disbelief and enjoy one of the best written stories on the site. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Nov 8, 2004 |
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Very good story with a nice twist in the end. (9/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Sep 1, 2004 |
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One of the best stories I have read in quite a while. Loved the way you were able to get into Jen's head and express it so well. I agree, can't wait to read more of your work. Is there a possiblity of see them a future story? (9/10)
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BruceCC
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Aug 25, 2004 |
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Fantastic story of a young woman finding happiness in submission. The surprise at the end of the story was perfect. I hope this author writes other stories in the near future. (10/10)
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Ecthelion
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Aug 24, 2004 |
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it has been a long time I have read such an enjoyable story online, I hope that you will be posting more soon and perhaps that you will be adding to what has already happened between Kate and Jen (9/10)
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ms2bused
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Aug 21, 2004 |
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This story is almost a word for word copy of a story that was posted sometime ago in the "Nifty" stories! It was a good story but if this is not the original author then I feel it very unfair to that author for taking the credit for a story that is not his to begin with! (4/10)
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- Replied by:
noebode
(Edit) (Aug 22, 2004)
- Just to clarify, it's exactly the same story as the one on Nifty (and elsewhere) as I wrote it - I only heard of this site recently when someone suggested to me that I submit the story here! So, no plagiarism, but it's good to know that you remembered my story enough to notice!
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BruceCC
(Edit) (Aug 22, 2004)
- ms2bused - Was your low rating due solely to your belief that the story was copied from 'Nifty'? I haven't finished reading the story yet, but so far I think it'll rate at least an 8.
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