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Teenage Sex Slave
Author: Jethro Jodhpur
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(Added on Aug 18, 2004)
(This month 156236 readers) (Total 384959 readers) |
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The trials and tribulations of a less than bright teen stud who has the uncanny knack of getting into trouble with any female who crosses his path, from his mom and sister to the entire female faculty of his high school. Close your mind, forget about such distractions as character development, background, plot and all those other things that get in the way of a gigantic dose of down and dirty sex, bondage, discipline, domination, water sports and anything else that crosses the author's depraved imagination. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
montauk66
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Aug 9, 2012 |
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Best story on the site!
I was hooked from the first sentence, closest thing to actual porn.
Would love more first person F/m stories like this. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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you always do well (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2009)
- Thanks for your review, it is appreciated. There are still a few twists and turns left before this one is over.
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s1xer
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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I enjoyed it,the fact that it is obviously unreal does not detract from the enjoyment I gained from reading the story. I found it well written and easy to read. Thank you (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2009)
- I must apologize for the oversight in not responding to your excellent review. It seems that the system does not notify writers in some cases, which is the only excuse I can provide. Be advised that I have started up the story once more and will continue to post until its logical conclusion.
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Jul 23, 2006 |
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This is totally, well, almost totally, unrealistic and that is where the fun lies. I am enjoying every depraved word, and plan to continue to do so as long as you keep writing. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Jul 23, 2006)
- First of all, thank you for taking the time to let me know your opinion on this little exercise in self abuse. As far as I am concerned, I couldn't have written a better review than yours. My compliments, Brava!
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pippa
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Oct 21, 2004 |
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I actually liked this story, though its not the type I usually like.I prefer more eroticism and langourous depravity ( giggles). However the author did warn readers in advance. I thought it was writen humourously and there were some nice metaphors.
(7/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Oct 21, 2004)
- Your perceptive comments are very much appreciated. I do try to make these fantasies as literate as possible while retaining the heat that seems to always draw a large audience, even if most are rather passive when it comes to reviewing. You seem to be one of the few who see the humor in much of these over the top exercises which are written as a lark.
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| Reviewer:
geoff
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Sep 25, 2004 |
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why do people insist on rating their own stories? Ok - Jethro didn't write the review - but a 10 from a non-english speaker is almost as bad. It's poor to average - at best! (2/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Sep 25, 2004)
- You are entitled to your opinion, but be very careful about jumping to conclusions when it comes to me reviewing my own stuff. That's a no-no, you know that don't you? As for the rating, is that because you thought it was me reviewing my own stuff, or what? I have no problem with you rating this an average, because that is what it is, average. It is written for the strokers among us, who are legion, based on the hits this is getting.
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Tylan
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Sep 24, 2004 |
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Well not being a native English speaker, and not very good at English either, i do not posses a right to comment a comment on the writing skills, but wut i really feel i should do iz comment on the ideaz and theme and all the events taken place in this story, i loved it, and of all the stories i've ever read here, i'd say itz the best !!! In fact, im looking for updates of thiz story every now and then and am getting disappointed since it ain't there (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jethro jodhpur
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2004)
- Your review and opinions are certainly appreciated. This is the type of feedback that an author needs to help him improve and in that way provide better stories for the readership. I have always suspected that this kind of story has a much broader appeal to people than they like to admit. Your comments seem to support my view.
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