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School's Out at the Witch Academy
Author: C
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(Added on Aug 11, 2004)
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Young witches discover that school is really over for them. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
submissivewife
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Jul 10, 2006 |
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I'm not usually into SciFi or snuff. That being said, I did like the story anyway. I do think there needed to be a little bit more background. The descriptions of the current scenes were adequate, but feel that the story moved a little too quickly. Thanks for writing! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Aug 11, 2004 |
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A little rushed, maybe a tad bland description-wise. Good use of descriptors. Could have used more background.
Promising universe; would like to see more of the setting. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Comneno
(Edit) (Aug 23, 2004)
- Fair enough. I was trying to sketch in the background as economically as I could, and I may have overdone that (or underdone it, perhaps?).
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