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Rapid Eye Movement
Author: kittenfemme
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(Added on Aug 11, 2004)
(This month 10437 readers) (Total 18431 readers) |
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A submissive dreams of the Mistress she serves from within a long distance relationship. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
FlameDesire
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Jul 16, 2007 |
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I've seen dozens of stories like these, but yours is unique. You gave us enough to satisfy, but a bit more was wanted. It was very hot though! (8/10)
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sunburststrat
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Oct 11, 2004 |
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Too bad it was a dream. I was really enjoying the characters, and now my favorite, Loren won't be returning. I absolutely love that line she had - "Do I have your attention?" She certainly had mine!
(8/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 13, 2004 |
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Nicely done, though I've always forced my own writing away from "and the little boy fell out of bed and woke up". I was ready to leave the story right there and write a scathing review, but I decided to give you the benefit of the doubt, and was rewarded with a fine ending.
You surprise your readers with the ending, and make them want more. Congrats! (8/10)
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lex ludite
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Aug 12, 2004 |
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The title caught my attention, and then the writing grabbed me and didn't let go until this story was over. Let's face it this plot line has been done by literally thousands of people, but only a few can make it sound orginal, this is one of them. In passing, the editing seemed to lose out to the emotions toward the end, no great tragedy when one is being ruled by honest feelings. (8/10)
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