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The Price of Love
Author: Alex Bragi
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(Added on Aug 3, 2004)
(This month 119128 readers) (Total 151459 readers) |
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It had been a long time since Layla had felt such a heated womanly need, and her body soon writhed and twisted but with a new kind of desire she had never experienced before. All her heartache and pain began to wash away, as she became thoroughly immersed in the sweet erotic pleasure that only a woman is capable of givng. A story of hurt, heartbreak, and healing. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 11, 2005 |
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HOT,HOT,HOT (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2005)
- Thanks, thanks, thanks. :)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 11, 2005 |
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A very hot story, you're definitely on a roll. One hopes you will send more chapters in a timely manner. Your characters are well developed though some lack any subtlety, ( Patrick and to a lesser extent Rose) perhaps to emphasize their intended roles. Your writing style is crisp sometimes almost sparse but it does keep the story moving along. Keep up the excellent work. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2005)
- Thank you. And yes, a good point about the characters.
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Aug 5, 2004 |
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what a hot story! it was very well written and quite delicious. this girl hopes you will continue it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alex Bragi
(Edit) (Aug 5, 2004)
- Thank you.
More chapters are on the way.
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| Reviewer:
EstabanBacca
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Aug 4, 2004 |
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Dialogue so crisp that the character's lips moved for me. A lovely economy in the style set the scenes perfectly without drowning the reader in detail. The sex IS arousing and never seems contrived. Thoroughly enjoyable. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Naughty Puppy
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Aug 3, 2004 |
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Excellent characters, especially Elise & Rose.
I loved the interaction between the two.
I enjoyed the deliberate pace and thought
the tale had a pleasant, steamy feel without
seeming forced or false. Thank you for sharing it!
(9/10)
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