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Debbie
Author: Allene Blake
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(Added on Apr 19, 2001)
(This month 28733 readers) (Total 60021 readers) |
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Mom and dad split. Mom blames daughter and treats her very badly until mom remarries and punishments become thrilling in front of step-dad. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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Written with a pouting, trembling bottom lip and a hint of subdued awe. A curling, pointed tongtip sat in the corner of the mouth, sometimes gliding across the upper lip to the other corner, as neatly drawn letters were confided to greenlined pages in an exercise-book, while the quill made soft, scratching sounds.
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jip
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Jul 5, 2006 |
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Well, that was a story! Well written and the "I" format is making it more realistic. (9/10)
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oldwino
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Jan 12, 2006 |
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cute funny story. sometimes you have to suspend belife to enjoy fantasy. i love harry potter. i read this the first time several nights ago.
tonight i read it with my baby gf in my lap sipping bollinger. she loved it and got wet.
unlike other sm stories with exhibition she
didn't want to act this one out. the only whips we use are those soft sex shop ones that make
noise and don't drew blood. We recomend this story as pure entertainment. we dont't understand some of the negitive comments we see on this site and xnxx and others about stories being unbeliveable. you go to the movies and enjoy the diehard series or star wars or potter. they are all entertainment. enjoy stories like this. my handle is oldwino. my gf is younger than my kids. thats the old part. we had thelma with the nipples, de toren
with the rack of lamb and bollinger with the
stories, thats the wino part. please excuse the typos. i'm used to doing everything in word. rea this story it is fun. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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what i would except from the author (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jones, Nikka
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Nov 17, 2003 |
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Loved the story. The narrative in the first person is very realistic. The details about what Debbie endures, the description of each whipping and how it makes her feel are just hot! This is surely one of Allene's best efforts. (10/10)
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vespasianus
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Jun 5, 2001 |
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I liked this story cause it focused on the pleasure the girl got from the punishments and the fact that there where no actual harm done to the participants. (8/10)
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