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The Instant Messenger
Author: Skip
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(Added on Jul 2, 2004)
(This month 9604 readers) (Total 19721 readers) |
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Husband finds his wife advertising as a domme on AOL and sets her up for a sting. The "sting" she will experience will be the literal type courtesy of hub and another sadistic domme. Features Cindy Prell of the "Skip Tracer" series. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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A good story. The plot is quite fresh and creative, though towards the end the pace changes from a slow, easy going story to a quick paced, rushed thing that made it seem to me the author wanted to end this story already by that point. And the intercourse between Cindy and Jim seems out of place, maybe it's something to be developed on further chapters? (7/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jul 7, 2004 |
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I liked this little story, but was a little confused by the story code. It was listed as F+/m, but that isn't accurate. There is one female Dom and one wannabe female Dom who is quickly turned into a sub by the real Dom. The husband, the only male in the story, is really neither. I would have listed this as F/f. Anyway, it was well done and could be expanded. (7/10)
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