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Adirondack Hard
Author: tough93013
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(Added on Jun 25, 2004)
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Four friends (2 guys, 2 girls) go on a camping trip. Around the fire one reveals his secret, extreme bondage fantasies. The others decide to help him live them out. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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I am very impressed by the descriptive density and subtlety here, and would love to see the story continued and completed, and other works by this author, be they based on true experiences or completely fictional. (9/10)
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benstrap
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Aug 25, 2004 |
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This is seems to be a true story, or at least based on one. Ted's words speaking out my own submissive fantasies and sexual wishes, so it is very easy for me to put myself in his shoes, feel what he feels and get very much aroused. I find myself envy Ted for haveing such good and open-minded friends. It is one of the best stories i have read so far. It is very well written and I can't wait for more chapters... (10/10)
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pgsnzn
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Jul 21, 2004 |
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It really awakens me. It feels true and it really inspires the feelings of submissiveness in me. (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Jul 6, 2004 |
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The story sure rings of truth, unlike many other "true" stories. It starts out slow, but then it does get going.
I just have issues with forcing the perverted lifestyle on others - a potentially conservative family has as much right to their lifestyle as we do to ours. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tough93013
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2004)
- Thank you for the review. We didn't want to violate the rights of others, though we were kids and maybe a little cocksure at the time. I wasn't there at the top for the initial meeting, but Sue, who is extremely smart and quick-witted, convinced the other hikers that we were doing an 'initiation'. One group said 'no way' and left fast. The others chose to stay on, out of curiosity (I'll be writing more about them in a later story--and I did write that I learned people are much more than we tend to stereotype them as being.) The truth is, the top of Mt. Ampersand is broad enough for several groups of people to be there at the same time without bumping into one another--though the sounds of the switches and my cries would have been hard to ignore. A big part of the thrill about bondage in the great outdoors lies in the danger that you will be discovered by somebody who is not part of your inner circle--for better or for worse!
Again, much thanks for your review.
tough93013
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nudude
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Jul 5, 2004 |
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this is the first story I've read in a VERY long time that is intensely erotic without being purely "hardcore"; actually, this is probably the reason the story is so erotic. And I'm not even really into exhibitionism! I hope you and Reba got married and that this belongs to the true portion of the story :) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
tough93013
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2004)
- Thanks for this wonderful review, nudude. I don't go for much hardcore, myself--I find the mechanics boring to observe after a few seconds. I'm much more interested in believable characters and in provocative situations. As for what happens between Reba and me--we go through a little hell and experience our own special heaven--as you'll see shortly.
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MistressKali
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Jul 2, 2004 |
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Very well written, I can see what you are seeing and feeling through your words, and the emotions are quite strong. It takes a lot to put yourself on display by submitting both "My Perv" and this story, but then again, putting yourself on display excites you, does it not? ~smiles~ Keep up the good work. I'll be keeping My eye on you. (10/10)
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tough93013
(Edit) (Jul 2, 2004)
- Dear MistressKali: Thank you for your kind words and your insight. Yes, putting myself on display does turn me on, especially when it turns on others as well; then it's not just self-indulgence. I hope my writing does that for you. I greatly appreciate that you are reading both threads of my story ("My Perv" and "Adirondack Hard.") There's more of both to come, though the "Adirondack Hard" episode will be concluding soon. I offer these stories, humbly, to the community of enthusiasts of bdsm fiction, of which I have been a silent member for many years (though in my stories my member is rarely silent.) Again, I thank you for your review. Your last sentence ("I'll be keeping My eye on you") purrs in my ear, presses my fantasy button and resonates with promise.
tough93013
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bullishred
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Jun 26, 2004 |
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WOW, loved it hope there is more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
tough93013
(Edit) (Jun 26, 2004)
- Thank you for your kind review! There definitely is more, some written, some planned; the next chapters include some corporal punishment, some humiliation and...well, why give away too much? I'll post the next chapters withing a couple of days. I also posted the first installment of the earliest experiences of the same character, Ted (me!) That story is called "My Perv," and starts when I'm about ten. Another chapter is on the way, which takes me into adolescence. My intention is to bring the "My Perv" story forward until it catches up to the time of the beginning of "Adirondack Hard." Then "My Perv" will take the characters of "Adirondack Hard" forward through the years. I'd be happy to hear any comments youmight have on "My Perv," of which "Adirondack Hard" is really just a part.
Thanks again for the five stars!
tough93013
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