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Cowgirl
Author: Topcat
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(Added on Jun 25, 2004)
(This month 312851 readers) (Total 424686 readers) |
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Iowa teen turned into slave to dominant female family. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Rasputtin
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Oct 26, 2015 |
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Great story! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Oct 5, 2008 |
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The story is of course totally unbelievable but somehow fun and a couple of scenes are very hot.
I think Rachel should find out about the other dominas marking Carol, take over Megan and Beth and get even with the other women. The story is missing a watersport flag. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mistress Ami
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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this was one of the best stories i have read (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 21, 2004 |
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outstanding (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Sep 16, 2004 |
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All the characters were interesting in this story, and I liked the way the story developed initially, with Carol being sucked into this lifestyle. I really enjoyed the bond between Rachael and Carol. One of the erotic aspects I loved was how Carol accepted the circumstances she found herself in, and took what pleasure she could out of the sex that was available to her (e.g. King). The story is setup nicely for countless additional chapters. I could definitely go for more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kura1204
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Aug 21, 2004 |
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i loved the story.. my fave parts are the relationship between rachel and carol... i just wished that there was more of the story... mabey something about the discovery of the brand... i also might like to see this hate beth seems to have for carol grow... mabey to a level where beth does something that gets her punnished.... also i would like to see carol able to spend more time with rachel... mabey have her get to spend some time sleepign with carol or go visit rachel at college... mabey have rachel get some acheivement to show that all of this stuff that carol is doing so carol can get this college is actualy doing something... mabey have carol or rachel have to do somethign horrible just so carol can see rachel compete... jsut some idea's mabey eventualy have a role reversal between rachel and her mother and or carol and beth... like have rachel make the move from slave and underling to mistress of the house... also it might be nice to have some other slaves brought in to try the new milkign treatment. i would also like to mabey see carol's mom get taken in and trained... mabey by carol... . then sold off.. mabey even her father too... i jsut wish there was more to this story and i beg and pleed please write more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
shadeofnight
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Jul 10, 2004 |
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I like the consept of a young lady being made into a slave without her being total aware of it, cause she wants to get in shape. The piercing where also an interesting touch.
Hope you write more (9/10)
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gundam
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Jul 3, 2004 |
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Love it!!!!!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
wabbit
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Jul 1, 2004 |
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very hot story, full of erotic action at every turn. i try to ignore small typo's when reviewing, and will do the same here.my only real negative about this story is the overly fast pace of the action and sequences...No time for the reader to get to know or understand the characters and storyline situations.How practical is it to take a seemingly innocent farm girl and turn her into a major pain slut so quickly? (8/10)
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Mobius
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Jun 30, 2004 |
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I loved this story and hope it will continue. I want to find out what happens when they find the cow brand in her pussy and the ring on her cervix. more chapters please (9/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Jun 28, 2004 |
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Write more, please? This story is completely worth a ten rating, but there were some spelling errors. Those are easily overlooked by the quality of the story, though. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Jun 28, 2004 |
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Very interesting storywriting, I like the growing up of torture. Interesting piercing ideas. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jake_t42
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Jun 27, 2004 |
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Great story, loved the torture. Making her have to run around with a plug in her ass is devious. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Jun 27, 2004 |
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The story was very good, but the typos were a major distraction! (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Kira
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2004)
- Looks like You write replys for stories not written for Your sexual interest. This waste Your time and is not good for the authors.
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