|
|
|
|
|
The Cage
Author: Kray
|
| |
(Added on Jun 25, 2004)
(This month 119190 readers) (Total 151379 readers) |
| |
How thoroughly Mary¡¯s life is changed!¡ Just few weeks ago she was free to drive her car all over, and today her entire world is the internal side of a little iron cage. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 7 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 14% |
0% |
14% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
29% |
14% |
29% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
| Average
Rating: (7/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (1/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
hoodedandmasked
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 12, 2007 |
| |
Hello Kray
Thank you I enjoyed that a lot. I do hope that Mary is welded into her cage so that she knows there is no hope of her ever being released. I think she sheould also be made to wear a head cage within her cage. Clearly English is not your first language but nonetheless Well Done! (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
KITTIG
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 20, 2005 |
| |
I loved this! very well written, kept me on the edge !! excellent :) (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Rusty Bedpost
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 29, 2004 |
| |
ok is it just me or is the level of grammer and spelling rapidly deteriorating on this site.
This is another example of a fine story corrupted by poor grammer that makes it almost impossible to read. How it is (was) managing to rate 7.5 I'll never know.
Improve the grammer and it might be worth it.
Rusty B
Note to authors: read your story before posting it, if it doesn't seem right to you it won't work for the reader.
(3/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Kray
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2004)
- Hi Rusty Bedpost,
.
I’m really sorry, but at present this is the best I can do with English language.
In truth, my last work would be “The Barmaid”, in which I have the hided hope of having improved just a little my grammar.
If I’ll have the opportunity to move a period to an English language Country I’ll have the chance to become more understandable, but at present it is an impossible option for me.
.
Thank you for your compliments to the story itself
.
Bye
.
Kray
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Kira
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 28, 2004 |
| |
Well written, i am also not very well in englisch, but important for me is style and ideas. I hope to find some new chapters from You next time. My favorite part is there You fixed the chains outside of the cage and use for torture. Do You know there is a similar scene in one of the HOUSE OF GORD Videos? (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Kray
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2004)
- .
Dear Kira,
.
You are so kind with me, you follow me, and you address me words as ‘style’ and ‘ideas’…
I’m so delighted !
Would you like specifying which video you are talking of? I really would like to see it!
.
Yours,
.
Kray
- Replied by:
Kira
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2004)
- Did You get the Link?
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
littleslut
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 28, 2004 |
| |
a good story that lets the imagination wander enjoyable (8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Kray
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2004)
- Beautiful LittleSlut!
I’m so proud having made your fantasy to fly.
Thank you having wandered,
thank you having tolerated my bad English.
Your
Kray
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
geoff
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 26, 2004 |
| |
mkemse would be a pseudonym for Kray I gather? The editor (ok, so you didn't use one) should be shot. (1/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
mkemse
(Edit) (Jun 26, 2004)
- I have nothing to do with Kray beyond reading his stries, i have never even emailed him
I rate based on what i like or don't like as do others, thus everyone has different intreests and tastes, but i am NOT KRAY, i do not even write stories, i just read them, sorry to disapoint you
- Replied by:
Kray
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2004)
Dear Geoff
.
Since it is unmistakable that you already browsed over my stories’ reviews, perhaps you have noticed that the most part of critics are just because my terrible English grammar.
So Geoff, be so kind to browse through Mkemse’s personal notes, and you will discover that until today Mkemse wrote 714 reviews.
I’m unable to judge Mkemse’s English capability, but I’ve understood that
Mkemse is an English mother tongue!
How could I to be the same person?
Regards
Kray
- Replied by:
mkemse
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2004)
- I have nothing to do with Kray beyond reading his stries, i have never even emailed him
I rate based on what i like or don't like as do others, thus everyone has different intreests and tastes, but i am NOT KRAY, i do not even write stories, i just read them, sorry to dissapoint you,
i might also add, if you do not care for his writings why read them, he is not the only author here, maybe he is NOT from the United States and hasa bit of trouble with english and grammer,
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 26, 2004 |
| |
That simple (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Kray
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2004)
- Dear Mkemse,
I’m terribly sorry you have been offended just because of me.
.
Your support is very important for me, and I hope you will continue to present it to me, even privately, in the case (You may find my email into my stories).
.
Thank you twice for your unfailing support
.
Bye
Kray
|
|
|
About 