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    | The Transition
    
    Author: Dreamweaver |   
    |  | (Added on Jun 25, 2004)
            (This month 73287 readers) (Total 80654 readers) |   
    |  | A cyber Dom makes the transition to reality. |  
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    bracemaiden
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Aug 27, 2004 |   
    |  | Interesting concept, and the nervousness inherent in the situation really shows.  This is more of erotic literature than a simple jerk-off story. (9/10) 
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