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School Kitchen
Author: Splyf
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(Added on Jun 16, 2004)
(This month 29990 readers) (Total 53673 readers) |
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All the girls in Trine and Christina's class have been selected as today's assistants in the teaching in the other classes. Trine and Christina both end up in the schools cafeteria. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 14, 2011 |
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SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jun 19, 2004 |
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I like these stories. Splyf has become one of the writers I shall look for when visiting the site. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mistresscandy
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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Splyf, I can tell this was written in a hurry, because it lacked the details and creativity that you showed in your last few writings.. I do enjoy your writings, but this was a little disappointing coming from you.. I'd much rather wait a long while for something good then these small ones.. please dont continue this trend? (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
rousseauimpaler
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Jun 16, 2004 |
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this story does present an usual snuff-cookout theme,but it has been written too hastily.sex is almost absent too.the writer should have elaborated the story.but the content is good,and the writing skill can very well be improved. (6/10)
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