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Calista's Abduction
Author: dr_mabeuse
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(Added on Jun 16, 2004)
(This month 54595 readers) (Total 70568 readers) |
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A girl meets her own desires when she's abducted off the street. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
muddpup11
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Jun 19, 2004 |
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so far so good...will keep this up ?? hope so..had a girl in college like that...a rich snobby broad...was my slut for 4 years before i sold her...to her father !!! But that is a story for later (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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very enjoyable and i recomend it to anyone who wishs a good read. the scenes we clear and well structued. yet another good Mabeuse story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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just wish it was NC (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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Yo Doc,
You know I believe this is a favourite fantasy of many hot and horny old men. Well, it certainly is for my old man. It’s never going to happen to him, or them, but it’s never going to stop him, or them, dreaming is it? I think they’re going to love this hot little story of yours. (I presume there’s more to come.) I want to tell you, I rather enjoyed it too. I felt it was kind of classic ‘slow build up Mabeuse’ style. Good clear descriptions to set the scene, followed by a little teaser of back-story, followed by a hot wanton sex!
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On the picky side, the ‘Let me paint you a picture…’ paragraph, for reasons I just can’t explain, kind of broke the rhythm of the scene for me. But that’s probably just me, so don’t put too much weight to it. I have to tell you, also, and I have to tell you it gives me a sadistic kind of pleasure doing so, that I did spot a few minor typos. But nothing drastic enough to impeded my enjoyment. Maybe two strikes of my crop for each one would be appropriate?
(9/10)
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OperaMask
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Jun 16, 2004 |
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Very well written. Arousing, frankly obscene, but done with excellent choice of words. Particularly good description of light cunt whipping. (9/10)
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