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Birthday Boy
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on Jun 9, 2004)
(This month 63855 readers) (Total 102453 readers) |
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(Book excerpt from author's published eBook) Ross requested that his wife be a little broadminded and become a little dominant in their sex play. Debra tries and Ross accepts what he thinks is her na?ve attempt until Debra devises a unique birthday gift. Happy birthday Ross, happy birthday - birthday boy! |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
boytoyx3mmmm
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Apr 29, 2010 |
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What happened to the rest of the story? I loved part 1. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Carmenica Diaz
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2010)
- It's on my website
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shady89
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Jan 28, 2010 |
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i want a continuation will there be? (9/10)
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FNorm
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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Very good short story. (9/10)
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kanashin
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May 20, 2005 |
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fun fun fun. I'd like more CBT (wouldn't we all) but this is very very good. The humiliation aspect is esprecially good. (9/10)
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pet10
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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The story probably good, but I’ m a student from abroad, I’m short of money therefore I reading BDSM Library it was free till now. Carmenica advertise in this place her stories… is it fair? I’m disappointed with Carmenica. For money I can read in a large quantities femdom stories (1/10)
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bracemaiden
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Jun 19, 2004 |
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While a teaser, it was well written. I liked the semi-public humiliation with the people that the chastized-to-be knew. (8/10)
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Roamer
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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This is great! And I think it's funny and smart. Who cares if the author sells their work? Why not? I got 2, and that's my choice!I'm giving it a 10 to compensate for the jerk who gave it 1. Shit, how could you honestly give this story a 1?
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
abitbent
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2004)
- Dude it's a good story and i admitted it in my review. It it spam however and i've dealt with it accordingly.
... and somehow you seem to know i'm a jerk. Whatever
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Roamer
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2004)
- Someone who says a story is good but rates it 1/10 = JERK.
If the cap fits...
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bdsmbill
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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Not a bad story. I hope the author isn't just teasing to promote another site. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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I've only read a couple beginnings from this author and i have to admit, they are delicious. It's a shame they are using bdsmlibrary to spam though. At the very least, the author could be posting an entire story.
For shame..
but the story is still good.. lol (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Carmenica Diaz
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2004)
- Birthday Boy Part 1 is complete in itself. When I first wrote it, I considered it finished at that point.
I understand your viewpoint but I certainly don’t write for reviews and people wish to purchase my stories, I say let them.
As I said, I certainly don’t write for ratings but I think your action in giving this story such a low one is rather puerile.
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soleil
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2004)
- Normally I would not wade in, but the score you gave the story annoyed me. You have admitted the story is good, so it is unfair of you to rate it 1/10. We are being asked to review and comment on story content and readability, not whether we are of the opinion that something is "spam". Quite frankly, I would rather read part of a well written, interesting story like this one than an entire story of woeful quality like some that are posted on occasion.
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bracemaiden
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2004)
- For all of the "to be continued" stories that are out there, I see nothing wrong with posting one coherent teaser. The 1/10 rating should be for legitimate spam, people who can not communicate and idea, and so forth. 1/10 is a travesty.
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| Reviewer:
soleil
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Jun 9, 2004 |
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Normally I don't read F/m, but I was so taken with Kryztal, I decided to give this a go. Glad I did, it's bloody excellent and the sly humour made me roar with laughter at Ross' predicament! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
shady89
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2010)
- i want a continuation will there be?
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