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The Enema Bandet
Author: Paladin
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(Added on Jun 9, 2004)
(This month 68064 readers) (Total 85473 readers) |
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Pissed off coworker takes revenge and finds he likes it. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
brittany heart
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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The structure of the story was bad
Is this a erotic story or
"my dreams" by Ted Bundy (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jun 12, 2004 |
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Peck's bad boy strikes again with another droll, or is it drool, exercise in outrageous behavior. The author certainly has a recognizable style with his trademark variations in the mother tongue, most of which are deliberate. However it is his imagination that makes it worth the effort of wading through some of his very bad puns to get to the meat of it all, or is it meet? I'm on to you, I think? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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i loved the theme, the speling errors are not an issue for me, i only wish you had detailed more the pain and sweating all the ladies went through holding the enemas, hope there is much more to cum (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kingcodez
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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Poor spelling but I found it quite amusing.
Keep writing but use spell check. :-p (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
ropeburn
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Jun 10, 2004 |
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Might have been a good story, but I stopped reading after a few pages due to all the spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. Example, it's "butt plug", not "but plug". Is the title supposed to be "Enema Bandit"? If not, what is a "bandet"?
"engroced" should be engrossed
"she was getting a little horse", should be "hoarse" (unless you bought her a pony??)
"I pealed her panties", should be "peeled"
"dank a cold beer", should be drank
"I couldn't video them .. pitty!" (pity)
"I donned my sky mask" (ski mask)
"break lose the hose connections" (loose)
"tore off her shear pink nittie" (sheer, nightie)
etc etc etc (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Jun 10, 2004 |
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Uninteresting. Badly formatted, spelling was atrocious, attempts at foreshadowing and enhancing of tension poor at best. Boring. (2/10)
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