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The Probationer Ann Winters
Author: John R. McDonald
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(Added on May 28, 2004)
(This month 35251 readers) (Total 67775 readers) |
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Probation officer finds herself being compromised and blackmailed by one of her charges; who then uses her and turns her into a sex slave to be used and abused by other women for her sexual pleasure. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jun 6, 2004 |
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What separates this story from most of the others covering the same territory is the wealth of kinky happenings that are crammed into each chapter. Couple this with the wide variety of victims available and possibly even more antagonists eager to get at them and you have the the recipe for a wild ride that could last for an extremely long time without any concern for repeating one's self. My initial rating is probably too conservative, but I've been burned more than once by other stories that began with almost as much potential and quickly crashed and burned, so I'll wait for more evidence before adjusting my rating.
Part 2 has proven to be a disappointment, especially in the areas of grammar and editing. The sentence structure, which was only a mild obstacle to my enjoyment has now become a constant source of irritation. It seems as if everybody is speaking in the breathless, stream of consciousness manner of Ann, which is definitely not a good thing. This scissor fetish has also become quite unsettling; once was fine, as a steady diet it does not reflect well on the author. For these reasons I must lower my intitial rating to something more realistic. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Johnny
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2004)
- Hi I have just poster part II hope that meets with your approval. If You Email me I will send it direct
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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May 30, 2004 |
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Very good beginning to an exciting story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Johnny
(Edit) (May 30, 2004)
- Thanks for the good review! I will be adding more to this story very soon.
Johnny
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 29, 2004 |
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I hope you add alot more in the very ,near future
this was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!111 (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Johnny
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2004)
- Very pleased that you enjoyed this first part there will be more to follow. Part II now post
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