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The Neighborhood Girls
Author: chuck
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(Added on May 28, 2004)
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With what starts as a kids' basketball game, neighborhood friends find the joys of femdom BDSM. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jennifer Williams
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Apr 9, 2010 |
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An amazing piece, excellently written. It's everything you wished would have happened to you as a kid, and the fact that they are indeed kids is what makes this so great. Their innocence is what makes them so bold, because they are absolutely unaware of the consequences their actions might have. I love the style of everything being told from the boys' point of view; it leaves what's in the girls' minds mysterious and just out of reach, which is a mood that persists throughout the entire piece. (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Mar 14, 2010 |
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Normally I do not read anything to do with under age sex. But of course no actual sex occurs and they are all under age.
What I do find a turn on is how similar the first two chapters are to an event in my youth, I was under the age of 13 when I got tied up by a couple of girls of the same age - unfortunately nothing happened, perhaps we were too young to realise what fun we could have had.
Any way a great read, keep the chapters coming, in both senses of the word. (9/10)
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Dea Menrfa
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Jan 30, 2010 |
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Awesome! Please continue this storyline. (10/10)
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Willman1
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Jan 29, 2010 |
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Excellent story more soon please (9/10)
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onewhoadores
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Mar 26, 2009 |
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I just discovered this wonderful story. It is extremely well written, and very hot. Even at this late date, it cries out for more. How about an update, Chuck? (10/10)
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James P
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Feb 20, 2008 |
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One of my favorite stories on here. You have a keen understanding of femdom eroticism and what makes it exciting. Well done. (9/10)
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souka
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Sep 1, 2007 |
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i enjoyed this story a lot, would have liked to enter into the world of D/s in this way (instead of waiting a lot of years). Have read the story twice, as enjoyable the second time as the first (9/10)
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bolondro4
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Aug 12, 2007 |
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just adding a pair of years to the girls would be the story more credible for me. They just show to much iniciative for their age. 13/14 years instead of 11 will do the story sound better for me
Buth the chapter Two must have a rating of 11... (9/10)
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chuck
(Edit) (Aug 24, 2007)
- I don't remember mentioning the age of the kids. The fact that they act immature may be attributed to the carryover of their relationship as they grew up together. For the record, Larry is the oldest at 17 (a HS senior) and Natalie is the youngest at 14 (a HS freshman).
If I made a reference to a different age, please let me know. It was unintentional.
Regardless, thank you for the positive review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Some year I'll try to post some more chapters.
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GuyInCellar
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May 2, 2005 |
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Very well written, and excellent detail. Very believable approach with well-drawn characters, as all three explore a learning curve to figure out what it all means.
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dr_mutta
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Mar 6, 2005 |
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i love it , its perfect. (9/10)
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egwmilaw
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Mar 4, 2005 |
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Very good story!! You have to read it.. (10/10)
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beeper1
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Feb 19, 2005 |
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This is the best story of this type that I have seen in years.
To me the character ages are perfect.
I tried this once when I was young but didn't know how.
I hope to see more of this story from 'CHUCK" soon. (10/10)
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headhunter
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Dec 4, 2004 |
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I'd like to read a few more chapters of this story. Natalkie and Priscilla could easily make this kid the slut of the neighborhood! (8/10)
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emmacd
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Dec 2, 2004 |
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Remands me when I was 16 and dressed as a girl. Pretty close.Mine was forced butit isn't forced anymore. Emmacd (8/10)
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niginuk
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Jun 6, 2004 |
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It was very well written. The story line could happen, It would be nice to see follow ups to this story as they all grow up. Keep writing Chuck. (9/10)
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Johnny
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Jun 2, 2004 |
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Good pace well written (8/10)
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bdsmbill
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May 31, 2004 |
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Like another reviewer, I had a problem with the age of the participants, but it was well done. (8/10)
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Breannefun
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May 31, 2004 |
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I liked it. I hoper there is more as these two girls figure out what it all means. (9/10)
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trainmanretep
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May 30, 2004 |
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I have a bit of trouble with age of the participants in this story but otherwise it is quite good. (9/10)
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lesv
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May 29, 2004 |
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Fun - first time exploration story. (9/10)
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