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Truck Stop
Author: Torrent
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(Added on May 10, 2004)
(This month 13600 readers) (Total 21101 readers) |
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On the road to Memphis, with an Indian princess and a load of FuckFoam, Daniel finds true love. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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i enjoyed the story, it was to me well written and flows well i enjoyed the general theme you used over all very enjoyable to read (9/10)
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- Replied by:
torrent
(Edit) (Mar 20, 2006)
- Thanks. I appreciate your comments. I'm surprised (and delighted) that the story is still getting readers after all this time.
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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good story not my favortive codes but it doesn't detract from a well writen and strutured story (8/10)
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- Replied by:
torrent
(Edit) (Jun 18, 2004)
- Thanks. I really enjoyed working on this one. The idea arose on a frustrating trip on I-40 to Memphis -- though I was NOT driving an 18-wheeler.
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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May 20, 2004 |
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This was really enjoyable... (8/10)
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- Replied by:
torrent
(Edit) (May 24, 2004)
- Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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| Reviewer:
Enrique Calzada
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May 18, 2004 |
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VERSION REVIEWED: Full (2 parts)
FUN/ACTION/SEX C+
CHARACTERS/DIALOGUE B+
PLOT/STORY B+
PROOFREADING/ERRORS A
ORIGINALITY/STYLE A
OVERALL GRADE/SCORE B+ / 8
A good story, but not very arousing as it glosses over some
of the explicit stuff. Plot is engaging and characters sound
enough to make for good reading. I thought a few of the scenes
were a bit lengthy/elaborate for the plot advancement achieved.
Style was very good, particularly the narrative that reveals
the futuristic world in a matter-of-fact way.
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
torrent
(Edit) (May 18, 2004)
- Thanks for your comments -- and for reading the story.
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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May 13, 2004 |
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This one is a grabber for sure and yet has the standard bill of fare of a typical Torrent story. I can only hope that the Indian princess meets a better fate than the rest of the author's main female characters whose dead bodies litter this site. Despite my concern I strongly recommend this effort for those who enjoy reading an extremely well written story. If on the other hand you are looking for something with plenty of good old fashion sex and violence, this may not be the one for you.
Just before the Blade Runner like ending of this story I realized two things, Cherry wasn't all she was cracked up to be and she was going to survive, which is some kind of milestone in the author's postings at this site. It also has to be noted that the amount of sex and violence was well below average, which prevented this exceptionally written story from attaining a higher rating. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
torrent
(Edit) (May 13, 2004)
- Thanks for your comments. Yes, I had "Blade Runner" in mind as I was writing this story. It's one of my favorite movies. And the South is my favorite place on Earth. It's made for storytelling.
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| Reviewer:
Tractortorture
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May 10, 2004 |
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Excellent start well up to Torrents high standards. Look forward to further chapters. I really enjoyed the way the post nuclear world was developed through the story & characters rather than just have a simple explaination. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
torrent
(Edit) (May 13, 2004)
- Thanks for taking the time to read and review "Truck Stop." I appreciate your comments.
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