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Living Together
Author: Estaban Bacca
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(Added on Apr 22, 2004)
(This month 8825 readers) (Total 13146 readers) |
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An exploration of the dynamic of dominance in a relationship. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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This is a very well written story that to many of the readers is terribly out of place. I would hope that the author is not too discouraged by this observation. It is erotic, but that is not its main focus which can be a real problem for many of the readers. On the plus side it may cause some of the posters to begin thinking along more sophisticated lines when it comes to the stories that they create. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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<<She wanted this! My already rampant prick spurred me past my paralysis.>>
'White Boy's Wet Dream' would make a better title. I'm just not convinced that she did want that. (2/10)
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