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Naturally Demanding but Nice
Author: Jim Hale
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(Added on Apr 22, 2004)
(This month 120830 readers) (Total 146103 readers) |
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Jennifer is an only child of wealthy parents. She is blonde and beautiful. She has been pampered and spoiled all of her 19 years. Is it any wonder she is conceited? Is it a surprise that she believes a guy should have a 10-90 relationship with her? She receiving the 90 while giving the 10, of course. A new guy moves to town. He falls for her instantly. She likes him a lot, but remember, the percentage of give and take. To her surprised enjoyment she quickly learns he is amicable to the relationship she desires. To receive 10 while giving only 90 is very acceptable to the guy who is average minus, and the girl, the more beautiful then ever dreamed possible. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jade
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Oct 10, 2004 |
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I love this Story. Jim really makes me fall in love with Jessica *purr* Even if some of the more extreme bits make me shiver (which i think they're supposed to) I find this work to be beautiful. The depiction of love that john has for Jessica makes me feel very wonderful.
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
buzby
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Jun 15, 2004 |
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Its such a good story it should made into a movie jim i like all your stories
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Wow! What a review. I am ready for a book even!
Wish I had more readers like you. Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
arty
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Jun 9, 2004 |
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Jim's stories are always my "cup of tea" in that i like fantasies involving beautiful dominant woman being pleasured by a willing submisive male. the snuff and biting/eating flesh is "over the top" for me. other then that ,i like 'em. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for your high marks and nice comments. I have changed the story a little, made corrections and added a couple more chapters.
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| Reviewer:
rgratt
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May 1, 2004 |
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A very well done story,makes me wish I was John, shows compassion as well as bdsm, keeps you reading and wondering what will happen next (9/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for your review and high marks. I have made changes in the story and added a couple chapters.
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| Reviewer:
Wmnwholves
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Apr 30, 2004 |
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The story is advancing at a decent pace. I would definitely like to see more. But suggest fewer quotation marks within a dialogue statement. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for your comments. Due to them I rewrote this and another story. Please feel free to read this again.
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pet10
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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I dont't like it at all.It is not to my tast (it is not my cup of tea) (5/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- I am disappointed in your review. I checked your other reviews and it seemed to me the criteria you have established is whether or no the story contains caning and if so, how accurate it is. I know nothing of caning, therefore none of my stories will contain that subject matter. I do not believe your review does justice to my story.
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