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The girls of Blue Mountain
Author: Arzak Blake
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(Added on Apr 18, 2004)
(This month 31031 readers) (Total 65779 readers) |
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The story develops in a small, isolated community where girls are educated to be completely submissive to men. Every detail, every aspect of their lives is controlled and regulated. Poor young Sally has trouble adjusting to her new life as the first outsider who has been moved to Blue Mountain in a very long time... |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
cymbidia
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Jan 4, 2006 |
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I would have rated this story higher but the author had some trouble with flow of his/her ideas--they were doubled between chapters. Still an interesting and worthwhile read for fans of teen punishment stories. It's unfinished--and i would like to read more. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
strapper
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May 21, 2004 |
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Great story line! I will look forward to reading more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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May 8, 2004 |
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A good start, but I found some of the writing a little obtuse... that is there were some misspellings or wrong word choices unless you were deliberately afffecting a dialect. Still I like the premise... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 20, 2004 |
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the story has incredable potential, am you add more chapters i will adjudt my rating review (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
billjam
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Apr 20, 2004 |
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Love the premise of this story. Would have rated it higher but this is only the introduction. Hope the author will give us much more. It has so much potential. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Apr 20, 2004 |
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Seems to be a good story, just stopped too quick. Was expecting a little more. (6/10)
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