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Order in the House
Author: Stiletto
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(Added on Apr 15, 2004)
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A real story of Powerful Domination, Strict Discipline and Intense Interrogation by a Mistress. When you start reading it, you can't stop. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Mar 17, 2009 |
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This is a well-written story, and is an enjoyable read. I'm glad I stumbled across it, and I'd highly recommend it. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Apr 16, 2004 |
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Every so often I like to poke around in an area that I rarely frequent, especially when the synopsis promises so much. The writing style is fine, the repetition of certain phrases that I cannot bear to repeat again was a major downer, the pacing was good and the conclusion totally expected. The characters did their thing, also as expected. I did not identify with either of them which is probably par for the course. On balance it was a decent effort that did not reveal any originality, which could be said for over ninety percent of the stuff posted on this site. It should appeal to those into this particular genre. (5/10)
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bdsmbill
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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Not too bad, especially since, as others have mentioned, there is a shortage of F/m stories. Keep it coming. (7/10)
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abitbent
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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The "buttery soft black leather hands" was good in the first line it was used, then got real tired after it was used the 300th time. Also i can never forget how "polished" the floor was because the author kept repeating that too. Sheesh. This story does get points though because I was sure I'd see the dredded word "handiwork" at some point but was pleased to see it wasn't there. This author has some talent, but it needs some polishing. Still, it's an F/m story and even a cracker tastes good when you are starving. (6/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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started out good, then slowly faded away (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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Even if it wasn't for the sorry lack of F/m stories of this site, this one would be worth reading. Not that this is a revelation of any sort and not that it couldn't do with a bit more editing, but on a whole, an enjoyable read with all the expected details firmly in their places. Fine. (7/10)
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crickette
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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I loved Order in the House. It was only one chapter but it did not seem rushed to me. I especially liked the ending....never would have guessed. I also liked the fact that she never called his penis, a penis. You would think in her line of work it would be a `gimme`. It was very descriptive and well written. It was blunt and very direct but in my opinion not vulgar. Looking forward to the next installment. (8/10)
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