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Melody Smith's Schooldays
Author: Eve Adorer
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(Added on Apr 15, 2004)
(This month 164731 readers) (Total 247926 readers) |
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Interviewed in "Confessions Confidential" on TV last year, the stunningly lovely Melody Smith made veiled reference to events that happened to her when, as a teenager, she transferred to the girls only St Catherine¡¯s Academy in Scotland to finish her schooling. Here she tells the full story. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 23, 2012 |
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Trash! I had to stop reading it was so bad! Very hard to read & so silly. Basically the story is...you're the school slut, here's your rules, now please all the girls. And because she was just so pretty...which we were told over & over & over. (4/10)
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JimmyJump
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Dec 18, 2005 |
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My English vocabulary fails dramatically to express my praise the way I would like...
Sublime writing and storytelling...
Thank you very, very much for this wonderfull contribution, Eve Adorer.
JJ (10/10)
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mackie
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Nov 15, 2004 |
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Surrealistic indeed! The discriptions over the top without getting any "yeah, right.." effect popping up. The repetions creating a hallucinatory effect. Keep the good work going..... (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Nov 2, 2004 |
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Excellent and well written story that we couldn't put down once we started. (9/10)
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dreamster
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Oct 7, 2004 |
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I have only joined library in the few days so have come to this story late. I am still stunned that I read it through from Chapter 1 to 15 in one sitting. A tribute to the unusual style which I found engrossing and highly original. It is well plotted and original. COngrats- from a envious reader/writer. (9/10)
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littleslut
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Jun 11, 2004 |
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wow one of the best stories on the site keep it up !!! (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Apr 21, 2004 |
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Hallucinatory, Surreal! Eve Adorer gets better with every story. However, Smith badly needs to have her backside severely caned! More, more we're still not satisfied.
Honestly, one of the best stories to ever appear on this site. How can you stop the story with the Bitch wheel, there must be more to come! (9/10)
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john964
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Apr 18, 2004 |
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An excelent story (9/10)
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titsman
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Apr 18, 2004 |
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Hi guys, yes Eve is a pseudo and He or She - is it important to you?- described nicely one of every tit-lover fantasy: Girls with huge boobs going braless and pantyless, jogging and made to do gymnastics exercises with skimpy outfits and to jump rope naked during one hour in front of all the staring studdents !!
This is, of course, as male fantasy, but I know a couple of girls who were already busty at school and who didn't put a bra to assist to the gym lesson - this for different reasons - but who got very excited by the male assistance staring at their Tshirt. (8/10)
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Alex Bragi
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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I have nothing to say, that hasn't already been said.
Only, regarding the sex of the author - think outside the square - is 'Adorer' a noun or a propernoun? Perhaps this is just the author's clever way of intriguing readers even more? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Apr 17, 2004)
- My initial reaction to the nom de plume was to compliment the author for an outstanding pseudonym. I thought then, and still do, that the name translated to one who adores a woman named Eve. Obviously Eve is a symbol for all womanhood, which might imply that the author, who possesses detailed knowledge concerning things mechanical just might be male. It's only a theory, but I guess I'm not alone on this one.
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longrover
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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The point of view and descriptions are very well done; I especially liked the alliterative strings of adjectives. I couldn't help thinking it was a boy's fantasy of the way girls react to another's beauty and humiliation, though. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2004)
- That makes two of us who are a bit suspicious over the sex of the author.
- Replied by:
Eve Adorer
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- It's got me wondering too!
EA
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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It is absolutely amazing to watch the evolution of this massive talent. This story is marvelously excessive, bends the rules of grammar and syntax to the needs of the author, appears to be rewriting the language to some degree, while at the same time generating enormous heat in its own unique way. No one writes like Eve Adorer, at least no one who has ever posted on this site. Where this story is headed is not very important, the enjoyment is in the trip itself. If I could, I'd give it an 11! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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The sttttory is outstanding, i seldom if ever compare to others but this is in the same class as "Owned Teacher" among others.
I had a slightly hard time reading the Englis but not enough to effect the rating, i loved the details of the Rules, the setting, the story keep syou on the edge just enough to keep you going
i hope you contimue with many more chapters and please keep the story going as it is (10/10)
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