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Helen
Author: Dimitri Perdikis
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(Added on Apr 11, 2004)
(This month 9808 readers) (Total 20684 readers) |
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As we are entering the 21st century, it is inevitable that, like everything else, we will rely more and more, even in bdsm, on machines to provide us with more intense feelings. wether these are pleasure or pain. This story is such an example an a little bit more............... |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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There are many good and bad things about this story. It is creative, and has a decent amount of action. On the other hand, there are many grammatical mistakes, and the repetitive dialogue adds little to the plot line. My biggest peeve is the story codes (or lack thereof). The bondage, nc, slavery, and torture tags should have been hit. (6/10)
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