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Doc's Orders
Author: Quin
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(Added on Apr 2, 2001)
(This month 99959 readers) (Total 133843 readers) |
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His friend offered to train a slave girl for him. He caught these Hitchhikers and sent them over for the training. |
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Reviewer:
nikita
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Aug 23, 2005 |
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Very good story. Would love to read an expanded version. Reading this felt like the end of a 2 mile run. Exhilarated and looking forward to the next. (9/10)
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Ranai
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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Recommended to anyone who loves a good plot in amusing narrative style. The synopsis only refers to the opening. It's best to draw a poetic licence veil over the glimpses of 'training': completely implausible and mercifully brief. The strength of the story lies in its racy plot. Does not do anything for me personally in the erotic sense; enjoyed the storytelling a lot. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jun 28, 2004 |
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fantastic a wonderful read (10/10)
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Reviewer:
MDOFlahertyII
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Dec 27, 2003 |
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I have not read such a story ever. It has held my intrest all day. Thank you (10/10)
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Reviewer:
codemonkey
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Nov 28, 2001 |
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Great story, but the end comes too fast... (9/10)
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Reviewer:
taskmaster
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Jun 28, 2001 |
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Want to see more of both story lines first Slave Jane's training and re-education ,then would love to see more of the Fisher women's introduction to the world of Doc, Charlie and Kitten. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
stalkerAub
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Jun 12, 2001 |
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Great story, but I'd like to see a continuance after the mom agrees. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Engineer
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Apr 13, 2001 |
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Very good stuff for fans of white slavery. Combines imagination with a good style and a sense of humor. The end comes too fast. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Bytebiter99
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Apr 11, 2001 |
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A good Bondage/Slave capture story. Shows how White slavers could operate. Well done story with a good ending for a Slave Capture story. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
kincaid
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Apr 10, 2001 |
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There are some great possibilities for the "training schedule" in this story. Both physical and psychological. Looking forward to the next installments (6/10)
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