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Pathetic Jessica
Author: TheCheshire
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(Added on Apr 5, 2004)
(This month 55428 readers) (Total 75788 readers) |
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A night of cruelty, humiliation, and delicious debasement. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
athos
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Jun 11, 2008 |
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This story put me off. As a Dominant who is proud of who and what I am, I was appalled at the way the story unfolded. It seemed more like a venue for the author to exaggerate his own physical attributes and to degredate women. It's one thing to force a woman into slavery, but this guy has gone too far. I suppose there are those who enjoy this type of story... I'm just not one of them. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
bernie
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Apr 12, 2004 |
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Incredible writing.... treats his whore slave slut just the way it should be....Best writing I've seen in a long time!!!
A real story line, not just pages of drible!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MrMan
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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This is a workman like effort. TheCheshire delivers on the story description. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
~blushes
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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i\'ve been surfing smut, all day. Everything was too \'tame\' or had too much bullshit, not getting to the nitty-gritty quickly enough. This story did it! My hand smells like yummy pussy! Thank You, Sir! Hot, hot, HOT!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachers
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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i like it
a little soft but nice (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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The writing is fine, however the fantasy is not one that particularly appeals to me. I would recommend this effort to those that get excited about dominating people with no self esteem. On the technical side of things the lack of build up detracts from the story's worth. It's like walking in midway at a movie. (6/10)
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fetish101
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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The author has a distinct way with words. It captured perfectly the art of totally debasing and humiliating a woman. The unfortunate aspect of this story for me was that it read like the author had just watched a movie by Steve Sweet..probably one of the audition videos that flood the tgp pages out there and wrote the storyboard to it with only very subtle differences. For that reason, my rating is only a 7. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
thechesire
(Edit) (Apr 5, 2004)
- Thanks for the kind words. Actually, this was an original piece. Not to say that I wasn't influenced by other stories, but it wasn't based on any existing movie or story. I can live with a 7 out of 10, but had to defend myself against allegations of plagarism.
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