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Cheerleader Slut
Author: ric
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(Added on Apr 2, 2004)
(This month 64407 readers) (Total 94751 readers) |
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This story is about a new girl on the team. You could tell Kim to do anything no matter how humiliating, and she'd do it happily. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (4.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (4.5/10) |
Highest
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Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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The girl has probably nymphomania, but still the story is enjoyable. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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Has promise but believability problem needs to be overcome some. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 4, 2004 |
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would have rated much higher if it was an NC Blackmail story instead (5/10)
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Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 3, 2004 |
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High marks for heat, but it comes across like the ravings of an oversexed, dateless high school student. To make matters worse, it's not as good as your other two efforts which also suffered from the same problem. (3/10)
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Reviewer:
mistresscandy
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Apr 3, 2004 |
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I dont mean to insult the writer, but this was very poorly written.. it has lots of promise, but unfortuantely you seem to have neglected plot lines almost entirely.. you didnt build up to this point and the girl is completly mindless! I\'d give this a complete rewrite.. (1/10)
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Reviewer:
Master_chris
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Apr 2, 2004 |
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I love the start of the story, I found it a bit slow at the being, but I soon pick up. can\'t wait to see that happens next (5/10)
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Reviewer:
Sir Draconis
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Apr 2, 2004 |
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tale has great premise but needs to have focusd shift into first person, ie needs to show the perspective of the slut reveling in her abasement. told from 3rd person entirely this tale is mediocre at best (5/10)
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