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The Hunt
Author: D Swanson
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(Added on Apr 1, 2004)
(This month 50714 readers) (Total 60717 readers) |
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A group of swingers sponsor a contest in which the wommen try to get past the men to reach a prize. Those captured in the effort are subjected to gang bang sex and B&D. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Sextoymaker
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Dec 29, 2006 |
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I would elaborate a bit. Good start though. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 2, 2004 |
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the story was good but long paragraphs make anything very hard to read no matter how good it is, if you can adjust your paragraphs i will re-rate the story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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Gah! I couldn\'t decide between \'7\' and \'8\'. I finally went with \'7\' because you need to learn how to break up those overly-long paragraphs, which make your story harder to read. I usually like my sex a little rougher than what you\'ve provided, but you\'ve been true to your story codes so I can\'t complain. You did a decent job of developing the wife\'s character and setting the scene/providing the backstory, but I think your future efforts could benefit from developing the other characters a bit more (and using shorter paragraphs). A pretty good first effort. (7/10)
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