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Cassie's Secret
Author: Jim Hale
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(Added on Mar 15, 2004)
(This month 107252 readers) (Total 197590 readers) |
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Cassie is a beautiful young lady who has been used by men. Now she is the user. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Wistan
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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Excellent story, a great mix of the brutal and the sensual. Cassie is a great character, a woman who truly loves total control! A little more detail would have been nice, the story moves very fast in places and I generally like more time devoted to mood and setting. But that's a minor gripe for what is an excellent read. More please! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jade
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Oct 10, 2004 |
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I love this story. As is characteristic of Jim's work, it develops beautifully and Cassie makes me shudder with the wonderful mixture of lust and fear that he evokes.
(10/10)
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MrEd
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Sep 2, 2004 |
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This is an exceptional story. What makes it for me is the insight that it isn't the obvious things that turn a women into a godess but the little ones; her giggle, the way she scrunches up her face, her teasing voice and her self centered attitude. A godess knows that it is her self love that makes her irresistable to others.
And what is a BDSM story without real pain and suffering? This too is provided for in abundance and in a way that is realistic and imaginative.
For many authors their first story is their best. I hope that is not the case for you. I look forward to much more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Sep 2, 2004)
- Thank you. It is reviews like this that encourage ordinary people like me to write.
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| Reviewer:
arty
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Jun 3, 2004 |
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Great story for those of us who,like Charlie, worship beauty and feel that we would do anything to please our Goddess. Jim's descriptions are excellent. His writing is especially refreshing to me in that beatings aren't required to make the slave serve. i've read all his stories, some chapters several times--still want more!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the time to review my story. Thank you for the high marks.
- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
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| Reviewer:
Grako
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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Excellent - if over the top on a couple of occasions. Didn't want it to stop.
If only I could meet Cassie. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank You! Hey, a ten is as good as it gets. I am working on a continuation.
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| Reviewer:
femdomart
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Apr 3, 2004 |
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If your preference is a femdom story that's both sensual and brutal, this one's for you. If you're searching for a domme with charm and charisma to spare, then Cassie's the one for you. I could easily see myself in Charlie's position and likewise fall under her bewitching spell. The woman is both frightening and irresistible and I empathized with Charlie during his tribulations.
However, chapters 4-8, the secret of the title, while delving into her motivations, disengaged me somewhat from the magnetic pull that Cassie had over Charlie. But the rest of the story more than makes up for it. I could go on reading and reading this story because it's that captivating. I want to see what else Charlie will endure for this intoxicating beauty. I'm partial to longer stories so I appreciate the thought and effort that goes into the process. Thanks. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for your review and the high marks. Your comments are appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
billyinc1
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Mar 31, 2004 |
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Cassie is a true dream, jim you have done a great job. You have created a Woman that i would love to meet.
billy (10/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2004)
- Thank you Bill. I have another that is being posted, "Naturally Demanding". Maybe you will like Jennifer as well. Cassie was my 1st story. I received several emails that wanted it to continue. I could have done so, I just thought teh readers would tire of her exploits!
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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This was a nice story, but pretty predictible. From the description, I am expecting it to really pick up later, and will adjust my score if it does. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- I am disappointed you have not check the story again. If you do you will find a lot of errors have been corrected. This was my first story.
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| Reviewer:
niginuk
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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A Great story just wish I was in his place. Please write more of this story:-)Dare I ask for cbt in it? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the time to write a review for my story. I am currently working on either more of this one or a continuation. If you like reading about cbt please read Naturally Demanding.
Ch 18 is where the cbt occurs. I added it after reading your comments on this story.
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