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The Submission of Sophie
Author: chloe
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(Added on Mar 15, 2004)
(This month 19257 readers) (Total 45977 readers) |
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Thomas teaches Sophie to obey and submit. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
neophytesub
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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Wonderfully detailed and arousing. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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Parts, e.g. the father-daughter/niece-uncle, are unintentionally funny. The story is well-written, but ultimately one has to ask Where IS the story? There seems to be no real drama here, but if one so wishes to indulge in how many ordinary folk indulge by vicariously reading of their exploits, then this is for you. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wmnwholves
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Mar 20, 2004 |
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Enjoyed for the beginning of a story... It was a little slow but finished welll... Hope to read more soon. (9/10)
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pbugler
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Mar 19, 2004 |
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Well written and I assume that this is but the first installment - I look forward to the developing of Sophie's submission. Erotic? Yes A little slow? I guess so, but charming all the same and certainly it has the makings of an excellent story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dee Driscoll
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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At the risk of sounding predictably sexist, I'd say this is a classic example of female porn. Strong emphasis on romantic features of the proceedings, descriptions of clothes, foods, frequent references to emotion. It actually reads very well, and even some tiny problems I have with it (the dialogue sometimes verges on parody, the shift between characters) are overshadowed by the pleasant tone and well handled rhythm of the proceedings. The fact that to some extent this reads like "Inititation for beginners" is helpfully made up for by some imaginative twists and moderate pace of the story. Very solid writing skills and some charmingly rich language at places. Nice. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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Reads to me like the beginning of a classical BDSM novel, "The Story of O" without the French. If there is more I will be able to revise my rating. But of course my favorite fetishes must be served. (8/10)
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david_dc
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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A charming initiation story. (8/10)
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