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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
AVI8R
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Mar 10, 2005 |
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Very god well written story. Ended too soon, the story was geting really interesting. Needs a second chapter. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 18, 2004 |
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you never disaapoint, i wish and hope you will have many, many more stories for this site (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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Welcome to your first effort at the BDSMLibrary site. A good piece of journeyman work with reasonable attention to spelling, grammar and sentence structure. You also had (in my opinion) the grace and patience to build a story slowly and carefully. I would encourage you to continue your efforts. You have started off with a fairly novel premise, a female lab technician in erotic play with a female secretary and with an off-putting, insensitive director of laboratory. Why not give it a whirl and take the scenerio on from here. Congratulations (7/10)
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