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The Amazing Mr. Mortimer
Author: Oralia Cruz
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(Added on Mar 6, 2004)
(This month 17904 readers) (Total 31579 readers) |
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A mid-twenties somewhat up tight woman wanders into the home of Lucien Mortimer. Mr. Mortimer shows her sexual adventures that are too good to believe. But what is he hiding? Who is Mr. Mortimer really? |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Mar 12, 2004 |
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Great beginning to this story. We're expecting more twists and turns from Mortimer's mind games with Lori. (9/10)
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Moggy
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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Easily the most accomplished of Oralia's 3 stories to date. It's intriguing and subtly erotic. Oralia has given herself a lot of explaining to do in the subsequent chapters. I'm hoping they will include a little more BDSM content than the opening one. (8/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 9, 2004 |
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I will be a very unhappy camper if this excellent effort doesn't continue. (9/10)
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teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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the idea of mind reading and thought control is intriguing as applied to bdsm. interested to see where youre going with this, although so far the action is a little tame. (7/10)
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wabbit
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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A fantastic start! Well written, wonderfully paced and mysterious enough to be "on the edge of your chair" erotic.So many delicious possibilities for further chapters!Please Oralia Cruz KEEP WRITING!!! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Harold
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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A plot! Hurray! Having just rated a story a '1', I felt a need to write a positive review and this is a great place to do it. We have the beginnings of an actual plot, some mystery to keep the pages turning, a slow creeping eroticism that makes for a nice build, and for E.E.Norcod's edification (not to mention my own), the story codes indicate spanking to come. What more could you want? How about grammar, etc.? Got that, too. No deciphering required. If the rest of the story lives up to the beginning, I'll have to upgrade my rating. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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Obviously the first part of a serial. What I like is the softly erotic tone of this slow start. The author is making an attempt at exotic color by setting the story in San Juan P.R. Unfortunately, there is nothing in the story that is indicative of San Juan or even reminiscent of San Juan at all. This is always a danger when using a given locale for detail purposes.
As the story unfolds I reserve the right to change my rating. I should warn you that I am a fan of corporal punishment for willful young females. Good Luck with your serial. (8/10)
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